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FIC: Disappearing Act, Severus/Harry, R-NC-17 
16th June 2008 23:50
Title: Disappearing Act
Author: [info]reddwarfer
Characters: Severus/Harry
Rating: R/NC-17
Warnings: AU, Chan.
Kinks chosen: Claustrophilia
Word Count: 1025
Summary: Severus discovers something interesting whilst on patrol.
Author's notes: Thanks muchly to [info]joanwilder for the beta. I fail at thinking of titles, and was running out of time, so I swiped this from a Chris Cornell song.




Severus walked the halls and waited, almost impatiently, for whichever demon seed would attempt to break the rules tonight. It was always someone and half the time, that someone was from his own house.

He walked down another hall and had almost decided to call it a night when he heard it: a whisper-faint swish of cloth and the slightest sound of bare feet on cold stone nearby. Severus slowly made his way and turned toward the sound and found nothing but a large wardrobe and a rather ugly tapestry of Salazar Slytherin playing a lute.

When he got near the wardrobe, he heard it. He placed his hand on the door and listened to the soft moans and slick skin on skin. Just as he was about to open the door, he heard a telltale hitch of breath and moved out of the way, into the darkened corner near the wardrobe just in time to watch which brat would exit.

The door opened and shut, but he couldn't see anyone. Potter. It had to be. He'd been sneaking around with that damned invisibility cloak ever since the Headmaster seen fit to give it to him last Christmas. Snape wanted to track the brat down and take a rather large sum of points away from him, not just for the late-night jaunt, but also for the erection he now had to deal with. Instead, Snape walked back to his rooms, and thought of Potter's green eyes as he came.



The next night it was a supply closet, and the one after was behind a thick tapestry deep in the dungeon, and the one after that was in a small cupboard that held trophies on the surface. Snape didn't stop him, but stayed near and listened, cock hard, to every single sound until the boy cried out. He then went to bed, and stroked himself until he did the same.



The next morning, Severus made a point to glare at the boy during breakfast. He'd barely managed any sleep, and the only thing that'd saved the night from being a disaster was realising the potion he'd made wasn't a complete failure. Potter gave him an impudent smile and turned his attention to his friends. The potion was supposed to make him sleepwalk, to Severus, specifically, but after three weeks and no signs, Severus assumed it simply didn't work. Perhaps it was the black beetle eyes.



Two more nights passed, and Severus was feeling that curl in his belly anytime he laid eyes on the boy. He only needed to see that impish smile or impudent glower and his body would react.

"Professor Snape," Potter said, drawing him back to Potions class, "is this right?"

Severus walked over to the table and looked into the cauldron. He could smell the sweat on Potter's skin, and he suspected that Potter was doing this on purpose. Ever since that first night, Potter had made any excuse to speak to him, touch his arm, or walk near him. It was as if Potter wanted him this way, off-kilter and near-ravenous for some sort of release.

"It's fine, Potter, as usual. Five points to Slytherin."

Potter grinned at him, and Severus knew, knew the boy was up to something; as always, the boy was completely unsubtle. Why that hat had put the boy in his house, he'd never understand.




After dinner, Severus made his way back to the classroom to grade the most recent batch of hopelessly incompetent papers. It only took two steps into the room for him to know that someone else was there. A quick glance around the room let him know they hadn't touched or moved anything aside from the chair at his desk. Feigning ignorance, he walked over to the desk and sat down, effectively blocking off escape. It was then that he could feel the short, fast breaths of Potter's hitting on the top of his knee. He began scribbling notes on the assignments, and waited to see what the boy would do next.

He had graded four papers when he felt hesitant fingers brush against his knees. After a moment, when he didn't move, the fingers were back, more sure, and pushing up his robes onto his lap, and tugging down his pants.. Severus almost looked down, but stopped himself when he felt Harry's fingers trail down his cock, feeling every inch. Instead, he gripped the edge of his desk and waited.

The hesitance only lasted a moment, and then Severus felt Harry's mouth wrap around the head of his cock. The gasp he let out was unintentional as was the slight tremor in his legs. No one had touched him in a very long time, and even the clumsy affection of an inexperienced twelve year old boy was enough to almost send him over the edge. The boy, as always, was noisy, and the slurping sounds of Harry's lips wetly mouthing his cock managed to turn him on even more.

"Hmmm," Harry moaned, and Severus could hear the rustle of Harry's own robes parting. He closed his eyes and imagined how Harry would look, on his knees, mouth around his cock as he stroked himself. It took everything he had not to come right then.

Severus reached down and placed his hand on Harry's hair, and clutched it tightly, shallowly thrusting his hips. "Ungh."

Two minutes after he came, Harry still hadn't come out from under the desk, and Severus still hadn't moved. He hoped there was enough Slytherin in the boy so he wouldn't have to worry about this getting around, because now that it'd started, he had no intention of it stopping. Harry then crawled out of the space, invisibility cloak in hand, and grinned at him. That mischievous grin that Severus knew meant trouble.

"Good night, Professor," Harry said and walked out of the classroom. Sometimes, Severus didn't wonder about the Sorting Hat's decision at all. That bloody brat.




Severus walked down the hall, as usual, looking for people out of bed who shouldn't be. He found himself once again at that wardrobe near the tapestry, and smiled. Severus opened the door and stepped inside.
Comments 
17th June 2008 00:21
So, it seems like only the lines "last Christmas" and "twelve" make this so very chan, and it really doesn't read like he has to be from the rest of the story. Other than that, I like this, but the extra-chan is a bit tricky for me. I'll admit the AU made me rather expect Harry to be a bit older, since it's usually later canon people want to dodge. If Harry'd been fifteen or a bit older but still underage, I'd be unconditionally cheering on the story :).
17th June 2008 00:25
Um. Okay? Er. Thanks. *looks at the top* Yup. I did pop up my warnings.
17th June 2008 00:38
Yeah, you caught me about a minute before I got back to the keyboard and decided to delete the comment, but never mind now :). I guess I just don't think of "chan" as automatically meaning puberty - I think I need to get my head around the definitions more, clearly.
17th June 2008 00:50
Well, it's not really your fault. Chan is just a diminutive given to young Japanese children. It's just swiped to mean underage. For the record, if it's 15, I personally use the warning "channish".

But, this is the story I decided to write, as it is, and I make no apologies for it.
17th June 2008 03:39
For what it's worth, given that what's illegal in one country may be well past the age of consent in another, writers are often ultra-cautious with warnings, and I think one tends to get used to this.

When I see the warning chan I interpret it as anything up to the day before the character's 18th birthday. I know some authors use extreme chan for anything younger than 13/14, which is what I personally would describe this as.

The thing that made me a little uncomfortable was getting so far into the story before finding out just how young Harry is here.
17th June 2008 03:45
The warning is up there. If you choose not to heed it, then it is not my fault if you become uncomfortable with the contents.
17th June 2008 03:35
Hee! I love Slytherin!Harry :)
17th June 2008 03:46
Thank you.
17th June 2008 03:50
Mmmm, deliciously wrong. *g* And I have a soft spot for Slytherin!Harry, so yay for that.
17th June 2008 03:59
Thank you. I really wanted that deliciously wrong feeling. :) And Slytherin!Harry is love.
17th June 2008 06:30
Love Slytherin!Harry finding himself in so many tight spaces. ;) Very wrong and oh so hot.
17th June 2008 08:29
Thankies. I saw that theme and all I could think of was Snarry chan hide and seek. lol.
17th June 2008 07:37
Finally - Harry in the right house! I doubt Severus has anything to worry about.
17th June 2008 08:30
Amen. I love Slytherin!Harry. I imagine everything would be completely different. lol. Thanks. No, Severus has nothing to worry about.
17th June 2008 08:47
Mmmm, delicious. Pervy Snape and mischievous Harry are completely made for each other.
17th June 2008 08:51
Thank you, hon. I think so too!
17th June 2008 11:42
Oh, word. This is the kind of dirtywrong Snarry I first started with in fandom, and I do miss it. :) Love the idea of Slytherin!Harry meeting his dirty old prof on his own terms. :)
17th June 2008 14:21
Oh, thank you. Yes. Every now and then we all need dirty, wrong snarry chan.
17th June 2008 11:44
Mmmm, yum. *g* Deliciously wrong and hot. I wouldn't be adverse to reading more, certainly.

And if people think this is bad, they need to read [info]swtalmnd's Thicker Than Water, which is like holy cow woah!

17th June 2008 14:22
I loved Amy's fic. Yes, it was awesomely dirty and wrong and brilliant that way. Thank you.
17th June 2008 14:47
Yeah, it was totally awesome. :)
17th June 2008 12:32
It has been awhile since I have read a Slytherin!Harry that I actually enjoyed. Great work, loved it!
17th June 2008 14:22
Thanks. :)
17th June 2008 13:56
Oh my! As much as I am not generally a fan of chan this was fun. :)
I think what makes it so very delicious was that Harry was so Slytherin, and Severus was quite unapologetic in his interest. *g*
I enjoyed that. Thanks!
17th June 2008 14:23
Oh, thanks! Yes. Well, I kinda didn't have much of a plot. or anything other than. Let's write a fic about dirty, wrong snarry chan with some sort of contrived hide and seek. Oooh, here this is it.

:D
17th June 2008 18:57
I too love Slytherin!Harry and how sneaky he is with Snape. Excellent work.~Sophia
17th June 2008 19:20
Thank you, sweetie!
17th June 2008 21:46
Ah, Snarry chan has been scarce as hen's teeth lately. Nice work! I'm really intrigued by your Slytherin Harry.
18th June 2008 09:03
Thank you. Yeah. I noticed that too.
18th June 2008 12:12
extremely handy use of potions. :D

The interaction between Severus and Harry was very different from canon (not only in the obvious sense but also in the sense that they got along, etc. well, being Slytherin has its ups). Still, it worked and it was interesting. :)

(This is ele from LJ)
19th June 2008 13:18 - (FIC) One More Time Around (Kubota/Tokito-PG)
Hi, hon. Thank you. Yeah, I wanted to write a little pwp that could possibly have this huge unstated backstory.
19th June 2008 04:15
Wow~ for Slytherin!Harry, I almost missed that word. So he's sorted to Slytherin and very sly. Haha! Sneaky Snape. All sorts of tricks were pulled out just to trip his House Master? Sneaky times two!Harry!!! lol~~ Thanks!
19th June 2008 13:19
Thank you. Yeah, he was Slyherin...hahah. I just wanted to have a bit of fun with the two of them.
20th June 2008 20:00
Nicely DONE!!!!!
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