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Kinky Kristmas Fic: Holiday Madness (Draco/Harry) 
13th December 2016 12:00
Kristmas Wish Fulfilled for: [info]digthewriter
From: [info]alisanne

Title: Holiday Madness
Characters/Pairings: Draco/Harry
Rating: NC-17
Kinks/Themes Included: Semi-public sex, dirty talk.
Other Warnings/Content: Anal, oral, second person POV.
Word Count: ~1920
Summary/Description: You know he’ll be there, which means you will be, too.
Author's Notes: Dear recipient, you requested a ‘quirky, angsty’ piece. I hope this fits the bill! Happy Kinky Kristmas.


Holiday Madness





When the invitation arrives in the mail you stare at it, turning it over in your hands as you consider what to do.

He’ll be there, you can feel it. This is just the sort of event he’d attend. There’s no way he could resist a holiday tribute to fallen war heroes, after all.

Pansy gives you a knowing look when you invite her to go with you, but she says nothing, for which you are grateful.

“Those aren’t your best robes,” she says when you pick her up.

You shrug, extending your arm. “You never know what will happen at these things.”

When you arrive, he’s already there, surrounded by his adoring public, as always. He’s resplendent in formal robes, his hair as ridiculous as ever, but somehow the tousled look suits him. He’s gorgeous, but, as usual, he seems unaware of his appeal, and that combination of innocence and sensuality makes you want to fuck him right there and then.

The people surrounding him are smiling, touching him, trying to impress him, and while he seems at ease, you can tell the attention makes him uncomfortable. After years of studying him, you’ve come to realise he hates the attention, but he always handles his popularity with aplomb, with maturity into which you’ve seen him grow.

Your eyes meet his across the room, and that intense gaze hits you, sending a jolt of awareness through you. It goes all the way to your toes. That’s when you know it’s going to be one of those nights, and you’re more than ready. Desire coils low inside you, and somehow you dredge up a smirk.

He raises an eyebrow before glancing towards a corner.

You incline your head.

“Well, I suppose I should go and find something to entertain myself with,” says Pansy, tone dry. “Now that you’ve seen the reason we’re here.”

“Shut up, Pansy,” you say absently.

She sighs. “Just…be careful, Draco, all right?”

She sounds worried and, just for a moment, you take your eyes off Potter to look at her. “I’ll be fine,” you say. “You worry too much.”

“And you don’t worry enough,” she replies before standing up on her tiptoes to kiss your cheek. “See you later.”

You watch her walk away for a moment, and by the time you look back towards where Potter had been standing, he’s gone.

Snagging a brandy from a passing tray, you toss it back, savouring the burn as it goes down your throat.

Licking your lips, you wend your way through the crowd, arriving at the corner of the room. There are thick, velvet curtains there, and just as you reach out to shift them aside, a hand emerges, grabbing your arm and dragging you behind them.

There’s a small, hidden alcove there, obviously a storage place for extra linens and dishes since they’re sitting right there, and although you’re right next to the other attendees, you can barely hear them. Then, everything else fades when you look at Potter.

His eyes are bright, his lips parted, he’s almost unbearably handsome in the damned dress robes, but before you can say a word, he drags you close, and his mouth is on yours. His tongue thrusts between your lips and you’re lost.

He kisses like he does everything, with his whole body, his soul, and before you know it, he’s walked you backwards until you’re pressed up against the wall, palms pressed flat against his chest. You can feel the heat radiating off him, through his formal robes, and you want to rip them off.

But you don’t. You soften your mouth, capitulate, let him control the kiss, and when he relaxes, when the kiss turns slow, sensual, you strike.

Spinning him around, you shove him up against the wall, your hands finally parting his robes to caress the warm skin beneath.

His laughter is dark. “Eager tonight, are we?”

“You’re the one who dragged me in here,” you remind him before scraping your teeth along the column of his throat. When he gasps, you smirk. “Clearly you can’t resist me.”

“You’re a fucking pain in my arse,” he growls, his hands settling on your backside.

You slide your palm down over his stomach and into his pants. “That so?” you whisper, your smirk deepening as he whimpers.

Sealing your mouth over his, you stroke him slowly, swallowing his moans as his cock swells in your hand. You swipe your thumb over the tip, his pre-come seeping onto your skin.

“Can you be quiet?” you whisper as you pull away.

Potter’s eyes glisten behind his glasses. “What are you—? Oh, fuck!”

“Shh,” you admonish as you drop to your knees. You’ve been thinking about sucking him all day, imagining how he’ll taste. The weight of his cock on your tongue makes you shiver, and as you take the crown in your mouth and lick the slit, you’re rewarded with a gush of slick bitterness and a twitch of his hips.

“Malfoy,” he sighs, his hands settling on your head.

You hum, smirking as his breath hitches, and as you slide your mouth over and down his cock, he moans.

“Quiet,” you say, pulling off to look up at him from under your lashes. “You don’t want anyone coming to investigate, do you?”

“N…no,” Potter whispers. He whimpers as you take him in your mouth again, as you roll his bollocks in your hand. His fingers tighten in your hair. “Although I’m not the slag on my knees.”

You moan around him, a shiver going through you as the words sink in. You open your throat, swallow around him.

He hisses, holds your head steady, rocking forward as he starts to fuck your mouth. “You thought I…hadn’t noticed…how much you…love dirty talk?” he gasps as he moves. “You’re such a…perfect cocksucker, Malfoy. You’d get on your knees…for anyone, wouldn’t you?”

You hadn’t realised he knew, and as his rhythm goes ragged, as he slams into your mouth, you’re burning up. Your hard cock is pressing against your trousers, and it’s all you can do not to come untouched.

He’s about to come, you can feel it. His words are garbled, but soft, and as he begins to spurt, you pull back. As his hot come hits you in the face, you close your eyes, savour the sensation. You feel deliciously dirty as his come falls into your mouth, into your hair.

When he’s done, you lean in once again, bracing yourself on his thighs. Licking his cock, you start cleaning up.

“Fuck, Malfoy.” He sounds wrecked, and when you look up at him, he growls something under his breath and, reaching down, pulls you up and devours your mouth.

You’re still rock hard, aching to come, and as you kiss him back, you undo your flies, reaching for your prick.

But he’s anticipated you. “I thought we could change things this time,” he whispers as he pulls away, batting your hand away from your cock. He gives it a quick stroke. “Maybe tonight you can show me what you can do with this.”

You pull back, stare him in the face. “We’re right next to a holiday celebration,” you remind him, remind yourself.

His smile is lopsided. “So?” He grins. “Can you be quiet?”

You sneer at him, even as your heart races. In all the encounters you’ve had with him, you’ve never done this. Blow jobs and hand jobs are one thing, but this is…new. “Can you?” you toss back.

He inclines his head. “Let’s see.”

Turning to face the wall, he shoves down his trousers and pants and shrugs off his robes, tossing them aside before bracing himself. His arse is full, well-shaped, tempting. You stare at it, your mouth dry. “Spread your legs,” you say, your voice almost unrecognisable to yourself.

He does, and as you lean in, pressing your chest to his back, you murmur in his ear, “Now who’s eager?”

He laughs softly. “You going to talk, or fuck me?” he asks.

You want this. You need this. You’ve needed it since school, since forever. Closing your eyes, you try to calm yourself long enough to cast the necessary spells, and when you press a finger into his hole, it’s slick and loose. But not too loose. He’s going to feel you.

He arches his back, begging wordlessly.

Two fingers it is, then. When you manage three, he’s whimpering, riding your fingers as they fuck him deep and slow. His forehead is pressed to the wall, his breath escaping in short bursts. “Just fuck me,” he says. “Come on.”

“Salazar,” you gasp, pulling your fingers out and, somehow, managing to conjure lube to slick yourself up with. It’s all you can do not to come as you eye his flexing hole. And then it’s time, and you line up, press inside him, and he’s taking you, squeezing you.

His hands form fists, but he doesn’t say a word as you drive inside. You start to move and he moans softly, arching back to meet you. His cock, which had been flaccid, is half hard again, so he’s clearly enjoying himself.

You stop worrying, and clasping his hips, you thrust into him, over and over, the pleasure shooting through you as you pound into him. He goes rigid as you move over one specific spot, and so you concentrate on that area, pummeling it unrelentingly.

He falls apart, his breath coming in fast pants as he bites his fist to stifle the noises he’s making.

You move faster, fucking into him with fast thrusts, all thoughts focussed on the pleasure you can feel building in your core until it bursts from you and you grind against him, trembling as you spill inside him. You collapse on him, gasping for breath.

He shifts, his hand reaching for himself, and after only a few pulls he comes again, moaning long and low.

When you can stand, you push away from him, do up your flies, straighten up your robes. A quick cleaning spell makes your hair presentable. No one will know what happened. Pansy, probably, but no one else.

Potter has retrieved his robes, has dusted them off, and is once again looking impeccable.

As you face him, you feel awkward, but you keep your face as expressionless as you can.

He stares at you for so long you wonder if he’s a Legilimens.

You look away. It wouldn’t do for him to know what you’re thinking just then.

“Right,” he finally says. “That was—”

You smirk. “Yes?”

He shakes his head. “It was fun. I’m glad I decided to attend tonight. I almost didn’t.”

“It was…tolerable,” you say.

He laughs. “Sure. Anyway, see you at the next party.” He clears his throat. “Maybe next time—”

You raise an eyebrow, meet his gaze. “Next time?” you ask, ignoring your racing heart.

He smiles faintly. “Maybe next time we can turn the tables.”

It takes everything you have not to suggest you leave together immediately. You shrug. “We’ll see.”

He nods and a moment later slips through the curtains and is gone.

Sagging, you exhale, prepare to step once again into the party. And as you part the curtains to exit, you smile. Time to find Pansy and leave. After all, you need to pick the next event to attend.


Comments 
13th December 2016 13:04
“Well, I suppose I should go and find something to entertain myself with,” says Pansy, tone dry. “Now that you’ve seen the reason we’re here.” -- LOL! I rather think it's Draco who's off to find something to entertain himself with. Or to go grab it, at least. *smirk*

Snagging a brandy from a passing tray, you toss it back, savouring the burn as it goes down your throat. -- Nice little detail with some subtle characterization there.

He kisses like he does everything, with his whole body, his soul -- And that's just such a vivid description, and a character detail that really rings true of Harry.

The weight of his cock on your tongue makes you shiver, and as you take the crown in your mouth and lick the slit, you’re rewarded with a gush of slick bitterness and a twitch of his hips. -- NICE. The whole description is sexy, but it's that twitch of the hips at the end that tips it over into "NNNGH!!" territory. ;)

His smile is lopsided. “So?” He grins. “Can you be quiet?” -- AAAAH, turning it back on him!!! Really, I love the power play throughout this. The way they each steal the upper hand from the other repeatedly, and the fact that it's so natural with them. It's like a choreographed fight.

You shrug. “We’ll see.” -- Aaaand that's Draco-ese for "yes," and Harry knows it. XD

The writing in this is incredibly effective. Not just the second person POV -- which works really well for this -- but the short, sharp, punctuated feel of the thoughts/lines. Something about that crispness strikes me as being very Draco.
8th January 2017 21:33
First, thanks for your help with editing. :)

Second PoV can be chancy, so I'm glad it worked here. It struck me as a very Draco PoV, though.
I'm always happy when my characterizations ring true, so thanks so much for that!
And yes, these two really do love their power plays, at least they do in my headcanon for them. *g*
Thanks so much for the thoughtful comments, Ro, they were much appreciated. :)
13th December 2016 18:13
Great use of the second person POV here, and I loved the connection between Draco and Harry here. Super hot!
8th January 2017 21:34
Thank you, hon. :)
Yeah, second PoV was an experiment, and I'm glad it worked. *g*
<3
13th December 2016 21:26
Love how you use the second person POV to create the mood in this. Lovely!
8th January 2017 21:35
Thank you so much! :)
14th December 2016 00:24
The people surrounding him are smiling, touching him, trying to impress him, and while he seems at ease, you can tell the attention makes him uncomfortable. After years of studying him, you’ve come to realise he hates the attention, but he always handles his popularity with aplomb, with maturity into which you’ve seen him grow.

aplomb

what a word!

That’s when you know it’s going to be one of those nights,...

OMG YES... MY BODY IS READY.

He kisses like he does everything, with his whole body, his soul,

YES THAT IS HOW HARRY KISSES IN MY HEAD!!!!!

Oh this is so fucking great. I love everything about this. I love how Harry wants there to be a next time, and wants to switch things around... I can only hope that he wants more one day and Draco wants there to be more.

Omg, thank you, thank you, thank you, for writing this hot piece of fanfic for me. I love SECOND PERSON POV when it's Draco's and his friendship with Pansy is just far too perfect.

I really loved every word of this and I am so glad you picked my prompt to write for!

+ e’s almost unbearably handsome in the damned dress robes,
+ he shoves down his trousers and pants and shrugs off his robes, tossing them aside before bracing himself.

Jesus fucking Christ. Every time *robes* are mentioned in this fic, I've nearly lost it.

Brilliant job.
8th January 2017 21:38
Yay! Glad you liked it, hon.
It's hard when you don't know who you're writing for, and so when your signup said you wanted 'quirky' I decided second PoV would have to do. :)
The Harry in my head throws himself completely into whatever (whoever? *g*) he's doing, so yes, it make sense to have him kiss like that.
I'm grinning for ear to ear that you enjoyed it! <3
14th December 2016 08:27
Oh I so enjoyed this! I love 2nd Person POV and this was done extremely well. Draco's voice was great, as was the dynamic of their relationship and the sex was HOT! Yum, what a great read!
8th January 2017 21:39
Thank you, lovely!
Yeah, I'm wary about using second PoV, but decided to risk it here. It seemed right somehow for Draco.
And I'm always thrilled when I get someone's voice right. *beams*
Glad you enjoyed! <3
14th December 2016 12:43
Oh gods, this is gorgeous. The second person POV works really well, as does the present tense. It's happening now, to you.

And the cameo from Pansy is just perfect, in addition to the convincing main two.
8th January 2017 21:41
Thank you, dear! *beams*
I was going for immediacy and intimacy, so I'm thrilled the PoV and tense worked. :)
14th December 2016 16:36
That was *amazing*! The usage of second person is perfect! And just, all these details, how Draco knew not to use his best robes, and the way Harry and Draco communicated. Pansy's advise to Draco to be careful.

He kisses like he does everything, with his whole body, his soul, and before you know it, he’s walked you backwards until you’re pressed up against the wall, palms pressed flat against his chest. You can feel the heat radiating off him, through his formal robes, and you want to rip them off.

And the sex was smoking hot. Oh god, yes, so fucking hot. Lord. And that promise of next time. . . *dead* Perfect.
8th January 2017 21:43
Thank you, sweetie! :)
Yeah, I was happy the second PoV worked. It can be chancy. *g*
And there's no way these two can stay away from each other. Of course there will be a next time. ;)
<3
17th December 2016 06:07
Ahhh, this was so gorgeous, and I loved the choice of POV here! It was excellently done, bringing us closer to the characters, and what both of them are doing, feeling. And so hot, guh, they were both so good together. I loved Pansy, and the potential between Harry and Draco here -- “Next time?” you ask, ignoring your racing heart. -- ahh, just so good!!!
8th January 2017 21:46
Thank you so much, hon! :)
I'm happy the PoV choice worked for you, since it can be a chancy thing. *g*
And yeah, there two are all about potential, aren't they?
17th December 2016 20:55
Oh, UNF. I love that first moment, catching each other's eye across the room. Mmmmmmrf. And this --

His fingers tighten in your hair. “Although I’m not the slag on my knees.”

a;lskdjflsakjf. :D
8th January 2017 21:48
Thank you, hon!
Yeah, I do love that dirty talk. ;)
25th December 2016 12:20
Oooh, I love a well-done second-person POV, and it makes such sense here; of course Draco would need a little distance from himself as he moves forward. His thoughts characterize Harry so well, and the Pansy cameo is perfect. Well done!
8th January 2017 21:49
Thank you, Kelly. :)
I'm pleased you enjoyed the story!
4th January 2017 20:06
Very hot! Shagging with just a curtain separating them from discovery and scandal!

Wonderfully written, MA!
8th January 2017 21:50
Thank you, bb!
Yeah, these two do love to live on the edge. *g*
Glad you enjoyed it! <3
5th January 2017 10:54
Deliciously hot! Love that this is clearly a ~thing and that Pansy is well aware. LOL Hopefully next time they do leave together. ;) Great job!
8th January 2017 21:52
Thanks so much hon!
Hah, yes, this is definitely a ~thing that happens with them. *g*
Pansy (and prolly other people) knows very well, I suspect.
And you never know what will happen next time. ;)
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