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Fic: A Night to Remember (Cormac/Hermione, NC-17) 
5th January 2011 13:26
Title: A Night to Remember
Author: [info]alisanne
Characters: Cormac McLaggen/Hermione Granger
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Non-consensual sex.
Themes/kinks chosen: sexual harassment/non-con.
Word Count: 1750
Summary: Hermione should be getting enough rest, so why is she so tired?
Author's notes: So this is prolly the last kink I ever thought I'd tackle, but then I got this bunny, and...well, here it is. Please heed the warnings, this is not my usual sort of story. Thanks to [info]eeyore9990 and [info]sevfan for their assistance.
Disclaimer: The characters contained herein are not mine. No money is being made from this fiction, which is presented for entertainment purposes only.


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A Night To Remember

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Having completed writing the upcoming Minister’s speech, her last task for the day, Hermione stretched her neck and rose from her desk. She was looking forward to a quiet evening. Maybe I’ll stop and get a bottle of wine on the way home, she thought as she pulled her purse out of her bottom drawer.

“Goodnight,” she murmured to the witch at the reception desk.

“Night, Ms Granger.”

Hermione had almost made it to the door when she heard a low voice say, “Off already, Granger?”

Suppressing a shudder, Hermione turned her head and looked coolly at the owner of that oh so annoying voice. “I’m running late, actually, McLaggen,” she said. “So if you’ll excuse me--”

He smirked. “You’re always in such a hurry. Will you ever deign to have a drink with me after work?”

Not if I can help it. She shook her head. “Sorry, it doesn’t ever seem to work out, does it? Goodnight.”

After she’d stepped through the Floo and ended up on the street in front of Whitehall, she exhaled. McLaggen really did give her the creeps. The way he always looked at her-- Shivering, she cast a Warming Charm and set off towards the closest Apparation point.

Once she reached it, however, her steps slowed and she blinked, an odd feeling stealing over her. It was as if something was drawing her towards the pub on the corner, the King’s Arms it was called. She moved towards it. Surely one drink couldn’t hurt?

Inside the pub it was hot, what with all the people, and she cancelled her Warming Charm. She looked around for a familiar face, then smiled when she saw him. He’s here!

Sliding into a booth beside him, she leaned in, some instinct urging her to kiss him. His mouth curved up against her lips.

“I wasn’t sure you’d come,” he said, pulling away and clasping her hand, his thumb rubbing back and forth over her knuckles. “I had to be very firm this time.”

Hermione blinked, unsure of what he was saying. Why wouldn’t she have come? “What?”

He chuckled. “Never mind, Hermione.” He picked up a menu. “You’re probably hungry. We should eat before we go upstairs.”

“Okay,” she said.

“I ordered for us.” He slid his arm about her shoulders. “We don’t need anything heavy, after all. Nothing that will slow us down.” He winked. “I know how...energetic you get.”

He had ordered fish and steamed vegetables for her and roast beef for himself. There was a light wine to accompany the meal and then, licking his lips, he rose, extending his hand to her. “Time for dessert,” he murmured.

When Hermione hesitated, his eyes narrowed. “Take my hand and come with me now,” he ordered, his voice low.

Suddenly calm, she smiled and took his hand, letting him help her to her feet. “Yes.”

He manoeuvred her towards the stairs. “You’re such a clever girl,” he muttered. “You’re getting stronger every time.”

The room he’d reserved was one of the nicer ones with built-in Silencing Charms, but then, it always was. Once inside, Hermione only had eyes for him.

“Take your clothes off,” he said, gaze holding hers for a long moment. “Once you’re done, get on the bed.”

Immediately, she began to strip and as soon as she was naked she climbed up onto the bed and lay on her back.

“God, you’re so gorgeous,” he whispered, fumbling with his own clothes. “I spend all day hard dreaming about you, recalling these nights we have together.” Crawling onto the bed, he straddled her. “And you don’t even notice me.”

Hermione stared up at him. How could he think she didn’t notice him? “I--”

“Shh.” Leaning in, he captured her mouth with his, sliding his tongue in and out as he practically devoured her. “Merlin, you’re so hot,” he gasped against her lips. “Spread your legs for me, love.”

She did, moaning as he slipped two fingers inside her.

“You’re so fucking wet,” he whispered, groaning as he nipped at her jaw, her neck. “I just can’t stay away from you.”

She arched up against him, shuddering as his thumb moved knowingly over her clit. He moved his head down, his tongue circling her nipple, flicking over it until it was a hard peak. When she was whimpering, he moved off her.

“Turn over,” he ordered, sitting back on his haunches until Hermione obeyed. “Up on your knees. Spread your legs for me.”

She did, moaning as those fingers slid inside her once more. When, with a softly spoken spell, he tied her hands to the head of the bed, she gasped.

“You love it like this, I think,” he said from behind her. “Tied down, me fucking your sweet cunt this way. Are you ready?”

It was clearly a rhetorical question, so Hermione just dropped her head, moaning as he slammed forward into her. His arms came around her and cupped her breasts, and his fingers began fondling her nipples as he fucked her steadily. “So tight,” he gasped. “You know, I bet you’re not sleeping with anyone else but me.”

Hermione whimpered. Of course she was only with him!

Leaning in so that his chest was pressed to her back, he licked her neck. “And now we get to the fun part of the evening. Ready, darling?” Not waiting for an answer, he drew a deep breath before murmuring, “Finite!”

Suddenly alert, Hermione froze, disoriented. “What the--?” She began tugging against her bonds and arching her back. “What’s happening? Where am I?” The last she recalled, she’d been approaching the Apparation point and then...

“Come on, Hermione.” A firm push almost sent her face into the head of the bed. “You’re usually smarter than this. Have you not been getting enough sleep, sweetheart?” There was a chuckle. “Although, I suppose you haven’t, now that I think about it. I have been keeping you up rather late.”

There was another deep thrust and bile rose in Hermione’s throat as she realised her position. Choking back her horror, her hand formed fists and she began trying to buck him off. “You bastard! What the hell is going on--?”

“God, I love this part. You are such a wild woman in bed.” He was clinging like a limpet to her back, sliding deep as he rode her, despite her attempts to unseat him.

His identity clicked. “McLaggen?” she shrieked. “What are you doing?”

Gripping her hips, he thrust firmly. “What I’m doing is fucking you, Hermione. As I have done every night for the past three weeks. And you fucking love it.”

Hermione tried to push back, but with her hands tied she had no leverage and her movements only drove him deeper inside her body. “You fucking rapist!” she cried.

“Don’t say that,” he growled, smacking one of her arse cheeks with his hand. “You want me, you’re just too uptight to admit it.” He chuckled as his thrusts sped up. “You’ve always been like that, Hermione, even in school. Wanting everyone to think you’re a good girl when all you ever wanted was a nice hard shag.” He leaned in, his breath hot on her ear. “So I am just doing what you really want. Admit it.”

“No!” Hermione screamed. “Get off me!”

“You’re always like this, you know.” McLaggen was grunting, his thrusts losing their rhythm as he started to come. “Mouth screaming no while your body cries yes. And it is so. Fucking. Hot.”

Even as Hermione continued railing against him, McLaggen bellowed, emptying himself into her. When he was done, he lay across her back, panting, his hands having slipped around to fondle her breasts. “So hot.”

“I will see you in Azkaban for this, you bastard,” Hermione whispered. “You can’t get away with this--”

“Ah, but I do. Every single time.” Rolling off her, McLaggan stared into her face. “And you are such a good fuck, Hermione. I’m sorry, but I can’t give this up.” Reaching between her legs, he moved a finger over her clit. “I’ll let you come, though.”

“You bas--”

“Clearly I’ll have to fix it so you can enjoy it. As I always do. It’s a shame you never remember how good I am to you. Imperio!”

Hermione relaxed as lassitude moved through her, spreading her legs wider at his urging. It took only a few moments before she was convulsing around his finger, her head thrown back as she rode out an intense orgasm.

After he untied her, he pulled her close. “I guess I should let you go home,” he sighed. “We have a big day at the office tomorrow. The Minister’s making his big speech, remember?”

Hermione nodded.

“But first--” He smiled into her eyes. “One last thing.”

She frowned. “What?”

Obliviate.”

~

Blinking, Hermione stared up at her ceiling. She’d been having such odd dreams lately, dreams that slipped away before she could truly remember them. Sighing, she got up, padding into the bathroom to get ready for work.

After a hot shower she felt a lot better, although, while dressing, she spotted an odd bruise on her hip. Funny, I don’t remember getting that. She rolled her eyes at herself. I’m becoming as clumsy as Tonks.

Once at the Ministry, she quickly got to work. The Minister’s speech went well, and, afterwards, she met with him, blushing as he praised her skills.

It was late when she was finally ready to go home. I don’t know why I’m so tired, I’ve been home every night this week.

Shaking her head at herself, she bid the reception witch goodnight and headed for the Floo.

“That was a fine speech you wrote for the Minister, Granger.”

Hermione paused, glancing over towards where McLaggan was leaning casually against a wall. “Thank you,” she said, shivering at the hot look in his eyes. “Goodnight.”

“Up for that drink tonight?” McLaggan purred.

Pausing, Hermione pondered having just one drink with him so he would leave her alone. Then, she narrowed her eyes. “No thanks.” Feeling his eyes on her back as she stepped into the Floo, she exhaled once she was outside. He’s so creepy. I’m staying far away from him.

~

Comments 
5th January 2011 19:38
Oh, you did a GREAT job with this. Hot and WRONG. I can TOTALLY see McLaggen like this. What a fucking slimeball. Heh. Although I prefer your normal brand of fic, darling, once and a while something different is a lot of fun. ;) Well done!
6th January 2011 05:50
LOL! Well, it's SO outside of my usual writing that I wasn't sure how it would work. *hugs you*
Thanks for taking a chance, sweetie!
And yeah, I though these two worked well for this theme. I'll have to make it up to Hermione, though. :)
5th January 2011 23:18
Oh, man. I can absolutely see McLaggen doing this, though. He was such a pushy, arrogant little shit in the books.
I'm imagining the day that Hermione discovers she is pregnant. 0_O
6th January 2011 05:52
*nods*
He is pretty creepy.
You know, I have often wondered why Obliviate isn't an unforgivable, too. It make it so easy to get away with crimes in the WW.
And yes, I thought about having him do a contraception spell, but I decided he simply wouldn't care.

Thanks for taking a chance on it, hon!
6th January 2011 13:23
I've recently dealt with a guy like this when I went out to a club a few times. I was with my sub, Frank, and I am a top, but this guy wanted to top me SO badly he'd just stare at me, leering, all night as if that was going to charm me. Frank was so offended for me that he wanted to punch the guy out. McLaggen licking his fingers over ice cream in HBP and staring at Hermione reminded me of that guy. EW. I think you got the tone of this exactly right. Hermione didn't ask for anything, Cormac is just an animal.
mini-beta: I believe the spells themselves are Imperio and Oblivio. And I don't know why Oblivio isn't illegal, either.
6th January 2011 15:55
Ugh. People like this turn my stomach, which is partially why this trope in literature makes me crazy. Somehow the heroine, after rejecting him for chapter after chapter, finally responds to his forceful advances... blech.

As for the other: I will give you Imperio (thanks for that, BTW, all three of us missed that), but the other spell is definitely Obliviate. :)
6th January 2011 16:01
Argh! JK was terribly inconsistent with her irregular spell forms, lol. Thank you for the correction. Now I have to go edit one of my fics. *nods*
6th January 2011 17:21
LMAO!
Consistency? You were looking for consistency from JK?
Dude, you are SO in the wrong fandom. *laughs*
6th January 2011 07:42 - love it
Anonymous
I truly loved this! I'm one of those people that think it's Mione's fault for leading on Cormac in the sixth book! Vain and arrogant Cormac may be, but it's Mione fault for trying to make Ron jealous by picking Cormac and going on a date. And the sad thing is Cormac actually liked Mione. But I do love the wrongness of the situation!
6th January 2011 17:15 - Re: love it
Thank you very much!
I dunno if I think it's Hermione's fault necessarily, although that was pretty crappy of her to lead him on in school, but I think Cormac is just enough off his rocker that her actions (and his obsession) pushed him over the edge.
This was more of an exploration of the idea that while it's illegal to kill and torture and force ppl to do things (which makes sense), it's apparently okay to forcibly remove people's memories in the WW (O_o).
And yeah, the wrongness is kinda hot *is ashamed*
Thanks again!
6th January 2011 10:27
Wow! You've really done a fantastic job with this. It's so believable that McLaggen would do something like that. He was just so spot on. Poor Hermione, though! Some day she'll have to end up finding out and won't that just be a nightmare for her?
6th January 2011 17:17
Thanks, hon.
And yeah, I think it's entirely believable that Cormac (as portrayed in canon, anyway) would do something like this.
*nods* She's sure to find out eventually, and then there will be big fallout. :(
6th January 2011 11:12
Cormac is one creepy man! This was brilliantly written, and I feel for Hermione <3
6th January 2011 17:18
*nods*
Indeed he is.
Thank you so much! :)
6th January 2011 16:09
Ugh... you've turned Cormac into such a disgusting wanker... the story is great though and rather hot despite its creepy factor
6th January 2011 17:20
*nods* I may have extrapolated a bit, but I do think the Cormac portrayed in canon had the potential to be a disgusting wanker, sadly.
And some of the spells in the WW do have a lot of potential for abuse, I'm afraid.

Thank you! I was going for creepy, so I'm glad it worked. :)
6th January 2011 20:14
Cormac was always a wanker! Next he'll be beating on her, except I have faith in Hermione - she'll figure it out and then he'll wish he was dead!
7th January 2011 17:41
*nods*
He really was. And you're right, she's already fighting the Imperius, so when she does manage to figure it out he is toast. *evil grin*
Thanks for reading, darling! ♥
7th January 2011 03:50
Gah, that's creepy. I've always thought that Obliviation needs to be controlled in the WW, but this just slams that home with a very sharp point. *shudders*
7th January 2011 17:43
Is it bad that I am trilled that I managed creepy? It so rarely works for me that I kinda have to revel in that feeling! *g*
And yes, if ever a spell was ripe for abuse... *shakes head*
Thank you for taking a chance on it, my dear.
8th January 2011 09:30
I don't know why, but I can't hate so much Cormack for this. Maybe is because I don't like Hermione so much, so too much clever for mi tastes ^^ And she have to show it every time!
Well, I liked that end...
9th January 2011 05:28
I tried to make Cormac as creepy as possible, and while I do like Hermione, this is a situation where I wish she would use her instincts, although it may not have prevented anything. This was more just me wondering why Obliviate isn't illegal.

Thank you for reading, sweetie. :)
10th January 2011 07:08
IJ ate my first comment, boo. This was so creepy that you may have to send your Queen of Fluff crown off to get the tarnish cleaned up :). And Cormac, dropping Hermione out of the Imperius right in the middle of things. Gah. Vicious. Clever. I'm looking forward to the point where she resists the spell enough to know what's going on, and flays him.
10th January 2011 21:04
LOL! Yeah, I can be non-fluffy is inspired, just not when my beloved OtP is involved. ;)
*nods* Cormac is an awful, insane bastard. I took some liberties with his characterization in canon, but then, don't we all?
Thank you, hon! Is it bad that I'm kinda chuffed that I got 'vicious' and 'clever' in a comment from you? Hee.
And yes, Hermione will eviscerate him when she finds out, and you KNOW she will. *shivers*
11th January 2011 16:22
That was so incredibly wrong but in an incredibly hott and pervy way!! Not your usual but you did it well... :D
12th January 2011 04:59
Thanks, hon!
Yeah, not something I could write every day, but it was an interesting experiment that, scarily enough, I enjoyed. *blushes*
13th January 2011 13:00
Wow, this was so dark and creepy! McLaggen seriously gave me the creeps. Imperio-ing Hermione, lifting off the curse during the sex and finally Obliviating her, and doing the same thing night after night - what a sick fuck. And it seems very plausible too from the little we know of him from canon. Never liked him, can you tell? ;) This is my favourite kind of non-con, nasty and creepy and not romanticised at all (I hate romanticised non-con). With the added mindfuckery that it happens again and again. I loved that you kept dropping hints of that all along. And I love to imagine what Hermione will do to him once she realises - because I bet she will! ;) Excellent job, Ali! You should be writing non-con more often! *flees*
14th January 2011 02:50
Thank you, hon! *bounces*
I am never sure if I can do dark convincingly, so this was sort of a test to see if I could. I am kinda thrilled to see that I have it in me (even if it will prolly not see the light of day too often *g*).
Yes, I think the key to this was the McLaggen is a creepy fuck in canon (IMO) so I could see this dynamic developing.
I can't romanticize non-con, I just can't. Dub-con maybe, but not non-con.
OMG, Hermione is going to eviscerate him when she figures it out, and she will, she's already starting to resist. *nods*
As for more non-con... um, maybe in another 5 or 6 years. :P
15th January 2011 02:41
Oh wonderfully creepy, darling! McLaggen was much more of a jerk in the films than in the book it seemed to me anyway, he was bad news all around and that really play out fabulous here. Poor Hermione, I so wanted to reach through the screen and shake her to awareness then cuddle her.

When you go bad, darling, you do it up right!
15th January 2011 02:52
*glomps you*
Thanks, dear, I do try!
Yeah, this bunny bit me hard and I went with it.
When Hermione clues in, as you KNOW she will one day, Cormac is gong to need the cuddling, because she will flay him. ;)
21st January 2011 23:33
Ooh, nasty.

I could see Cormac's character morphing into this scumbag, though, given time and lack of morals. The seeds of this scumbag are there in the canon character.

Horrible story, but very well written.
22nd January 2011 21:25
*nods*
Yes he is definitely a bastard here, and, as you say, the seeds for this sort of behavior were there in canon..
Interestingly (given my angst/non-con allergy) this story flowed quite easily. DD does have a way of drawing new things from me (that's a big part of why I love writing for this community so much).

Thank you for the thoughtful comments. :)
17th June 2012 04:31
;LAJKSDFL;JSAL;FJDASLFKJ !!!! I found this last week and WAIT, WHERE IS MY COMMENT?? I could have sworn I flailed at you then, but maybe that was another fic of yours? I went on an Ali spree! :)) ANYWAY, this is so completely glorious for non-con fic fen like me, the structure and the entire scenario, and and wooooo! SO AWFUL but so very, very successful as a story. I am both creeped out and applauding wildly. :) The fact that he brings her back in the middle of raping her is so completely awful and also glorious in its awfulness, if that makes sense.

♥♥♥♥♥
17th June 2012 22:29
Thank you, sweetie! What a lovely comment!
As you no doubt know, this is totally not my usual, but why else write here if not to explore new things, right? And this idea grabbed me and would not let go.
It also felt kinda cannon-y, if that makes sense. The actor who played McLaggen in the movie pulled off smarmy creepiness really well, so it just all seemed to work in my head. I'm thrilled it worked for you, too!

And thank you so much for the rec, that was lovely of you! ♥
21st February 2014 21:13
[info]tamlane linked me here as one of her favorite non-con fics. I DO understand why. Holymoly! That was AMAZING!
21st February 2014 22:24
Aww, thank you, hon! :)
Yeah, it was weird for my fluffy muse to come up with this, but it definitely worked for what I wanted at the time, which was to write something very different.
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