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Birthday Card Comment Kink! 
19th March 2017 00:01
Greetings and welcome to
Birthday Card Comment Kink!


Our members have made birthday wishes for smutty little ficlets and sketches that would make their birthday very happy indeed. Now everyone has the opportunity to fulfill those wishes -- in the form of comment pr0n!

The birthday card is now open and awaiting your signature! It will remain open until the end of April.

Please read the information and instructions before you sign our birthday card:

• Request fills must be a minimum of 200 words (if fic) or a sketch equivalent (if art). The maximum for fic is what fits into a single comment box.
• Since fills will be short, we're not going to be strictly policing the rating of each piece. Just remember this is Daily Deviant and we want to see some sex!
• Each request may be filled twice -- once by a member and once by a watcher.
• When filling a request, leave it in a comment directly in a reply to the request you're filling.
• When filling a request, note whether you're filling it as a watcher or a member.
• If you are now or have ever been a posting member of Daily Deviant, you'll be filling the requests as a member.
• Claiming of requests is available but optional. What this means is that you need not claim a request in order to fill it, but if it's already claimed by someone else, it's off limits.
• In order to claim a request, comment directly in a reply to the request stating that you're claiming it. Be sure to note whether you're claiming it as a member or a watcher.
• Since we want as many kinky birthday cards as possible, there is an expiration date on claims. One week after a claim is made (as per the time stamp on the comment), if the prompt has not been filled, the claim expires and the prompt is open for claiming or filling by someone else. (We'll try to keep track and delete the expired ones, but we may miss a few, so you can just keep an eye on the time stamps.) So if a prompt you really love appears to be taken, remember to check back (although we hope you'll be following and playing along all month long!).
• If you've made a claim that has expired, you may still post a fill in reply to the prompt as long as no one else fills it or claims it first.
• Participants may have a total of two outstanding claims at a time. I.e., you may claim two requests, then when you've filled one, you may claim a third, etc.
• Additional prompts may continue to appear, so do check back!
Commenting, interacting, and generally having fun is welcome and encouraged!! Fandom is all about interaction with like-minded perverts people. Let's enjoy some friendly, smutty celebrating! ;D

Got all that? Okay, good! Now...

RACY RACERS, START YOUR EROTIC ENGINES!
Comments 
7th April 2017 19:11 - Re: MEMBER FILL [3/3]
Oh Godric and Salazar, now this was new. It was all tightness and heat, and it felt like Ron’s arse was eagerly sucking him in as he went. The pressure on his length stung at first, but then it quickly melted into something that could only be described as utterly divine. So much so that his hips stuttered, forcing the rest in a little faster and deeper than he’d intended, to which he heard the redhead gasp.

“Oh Merlin…”

“Shit,” Draco paused, afraid for a moment that he was hurting him, “sorry, I’ll go slow--”

“No no, you’re fine, it’s--bloody hell, that feels amazing…”

That one Draco felt all the way from the top of his head down to his toes. Biting his lip against a groan, he tightened his grip and thrust, setting a steady, even pace. Based on all prior contact with said man, he should’ve known that wouldn’t last; neither of them were likely to settle for that when in each other’s company. Ron urged him on until Draco’s hips were snapping forward with abandon, forcing his partner further down onto the comforter beneath him.

Ron dropped to one elbow, his opposite hand slipping down him to take hold of his cock. It was a good thing he’d thought of it, too, because Draco couldn’t have possibly spared another brain cell. The change in angle was merciless; he didn’t think he’d ever surged towards orgasm so fast in his life. With each thrust, Ron was pushing back to meet him, and Draco thought he must’ve wailed like to wake the dead when he came, his legs quaking as he pumped himself dry. He could still both see and feel the redhead stroking himself, and it only took a few more seconds before he followed him. When he did, his arse clenched around Draco’s softening cock in a way that made his vision momentarily fuzz out. Had it not been for simple anatomy, he might’ve believed he could’ve gone off again just from that.

They collapsed onto their sides, and Draco pulled out, feeling his come dribble in his wake. He barely noticed when Ron grasped the hand he’d laid on his chest and twisted around, simply kissed him languidly back on pure instinct. Somehow, he was more worn out than he normally would be after such a relatively quick encounter. But then he saw the way that Ron was smirking at him, and something not entirely foreign fluttered in his chest.

“Good?”

He didn’t know how to answer that at first. It hadn’t just been good, it’d been...well, bloody brilliant, if he was being honest. He wondered if it had been the same for Ron...But the glassy film over his eyes told him that he was just as sated as Draco felt. So he nodded. Ron looked positively delighted.

“Enough to do it again sometime?”

“I think I could be persuaded.”
7th April 2017 20:43 - Re: MEMBER FILL [3/3]
Oooo, that was super hot! I love reading fics with dynamics switches like this, and I thought you did a brilliant job capturing these two.
8th April 2017 14:22 - Re: MEMBER FILL [3/3]
Yes, I love it, too!! I'm so glad you enjoyed this, though; it was actually my first time writing Draco as a top, and I don't know why, by it fought me a little bit, haha.
8th April 2017 00:13 - Re: MEMBER FILL [3/3]
Oh! I see this, I see this! I need to spend a little time catching up with the mod ends of things here, so I'll be back to read this once I have all of that in order. :D
8th April 2017 14:26 - Re: MEMBER FILL [3/3]
Haha, no worries! :3 I hope you like it!
8th April 2017 16:39 - Re: MEMBER FILL [3/3]
Wonderful!
10th April 2017 16:46 - Re: MEMBER FILL [3/3]
Thank you! :)
19th December 2018 19:03 - Re: MEMBER FILL [3/3]
I am SO SORRY that I never commented on this fic properly. I have absolutely no excuse other than that my life has been absolute shit for the last, oh, seven years, give or take, and I've been in a wholly miserable place. I'm finally, finally ready and able to rejoin the land of the living -- or take a solid stab at it, at any rate -- and try to start making up for some of my abysmal failures of the last few years. So here is my sincere apology along with one of the latest comments in the history of late comments (whether you want either one or not!).

Of course, it's been so long since I first read this that I had to do a reread in order to comment properly. But that was not at all a hardship, I assure you. ;D Now I just have to come up with the words to point out all the things that are fantastic here. I'm super out of practice, so I probably won't be able to do the fic justice, but... I'll give it a shot...

I absolutely love the flipping of the trope -- reluctant top rather than reluctant bottom for once. Yes, yes, I know that was my prompt. But you just did such a damn good job of selling it! Oh, man, did you ever...!

Draco and the reasons for his reluctance are just perfect. I adore that he bottoms purely because having a cock up his arse feels good -- there doesn't need to be any deeper reason than that. And he's resistant to change because he's self-centered and wants to have things his way... and also because there's insecurity involved in the possibility of not being good at something he's never done before. That rings so true to character for Draco.

But the way he reacts to Ron's "please"... That's the first hint that Draco actually does have what it takes to control his partner's pleasure and enjoy every second of the power trip. ;D

...And that was the point where I forgot that I was supposed to be constructing a comment and just got fully absorbed reading the fic again. Draco's thoughts are just so much fun to read as he gradually gains confidence and enjoyment in fits and starts.

A shudder ran down Ron’s spine, and he moaned low in his throat as he arched into the touch. Draco’s flagging erection perked up at the sound. Okay, maybe he really could do this… -- LOOOOL Maybe...? XD

The "it wasn’t as if he was about to perform surgery, or something. It was just fucking" and "Oh Godric and Salazar, now this was new" and "It was a good thing he’d thought of it, too, because Draco couldn’t have possibly spared another brain cell" too... Seriously, so many great little lines that made me cackle with pervy glee.

It's just so hot in all its awkward glory. Nnnnngh and yesssss and a whole world of YAY!!!

Seriously, brilliant job with the prompt, and apologies again for not commenting properly when I should have.
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