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Birthday Card Comment Kink! 
19th March 2017 00:01
Greetings and welcome to
Birthday Card Comment Kink!


Our members have made birthday wishes for smutty little ficlets and sketches that would make their birthday very happy indeed. Now everyone has the opportunity to fulfill those wishes -- in the form of comment pr0n!

The birthday card is now open and awaiting your signature! It will remain open until the end of April.

Please read the information and instructions before you sign our birthday card:

• Request fills must be a minimum of 200 words (if fic) or a sketch equivalent (if art). The maximum for fic is what fits into a single comment box.
• Since fills will be short, we're not going to be strictly policing the rating of each piece. Just remember this is Daily Deviant and we want to see some sex!
• Each request may be filled twice -- once by a member and once by a watcher.
• When filling a request, leave it in a comment directly in a reply to the request you're filling.
• When filling a request, note whether you're filling it as a watcher or a member.
• If you are now or have ever been a posting member of Daily Deviant, you'll be filling the requests as a member.
• Claiming of requests is available but optional. What this means is that you need not claim a request in order to fill it, but if it's already claimed by someone else, it's off limits.
• In order to claim a request, comment directly in a reply to the request stating that you're claiming it. Be sure to note whether you're claiming it as a member or a watcher.
• Since we want as many kinky birthday cards as possible, there is an expiration date on claims. One week after a claim is made (as per the time stamp on the comment), if the prompt has not been filled, the claim expires and the prompt is open for claiming or filling by someone else. (We'll try to keep track and delete the expired ones, but we may miss a few, so you can just keep an eye on the time stamps.) So if a prompt you really love appears to be taken, remember to check back (although we hope you'll be following and playing along all month long!).
• If you've made a claim that has expired, you may still post a fill in reply to the prompt as long as no one else fills it or claims it first.
• Participants may have a total of two outstanding claims at a time. I.e., you may claim two requests, then when you've filled one, you may claim a third, etc.
• Additional prompts may continue to appear, so do check back!
Commenting, interacting, and generally having fun is welcome and encouraged!! Fandom is all about interaction with like-minded perverts people. Let's enjoy some friendly, smutty celebrating! ;D

Got all that? Okay, good! Now...

RACY RACERS, START YOUR EROTIC ENGINES!
Comments 
28th March 2017 19:11 - Re: Fill: Only A Dream Away (Fantasy) (2/2)
Being in Tonks' vicinity almost always gave Ron an immediate hard-on. Granted, at the age of 15, nearly anything could and did give him an erection, especially being around girls of any sort. This, however, was something different. She was all he could think about. It was dead embarrassing.

In the privacy of his borrowed bedroom, Ron would stick his hand down his pyjama bottoms, free his hard cock from the constraints of his pants, and start to stroke. Tonks would immediately spring to mind. He'd try to imagine doing things with other girls to bring himself off — Hermione, Lavender, Parvati, random girls at school, but whoever it was would always transform into Tonks: pink hair, dark eyes, incredible tits and arse, and all.

Sometimes she'd be wicked, teasing him and laugh at him for falling for her disguise. Other times she'd be demure and submissive, begging him to forgive her for winding him up. No matter what, it would always lead to sex. Hot, sweaty, mind-blowing sex. Sometimes she'd take his cock in her warm, wet mouth and suck him off nice and deep. Sometimes he'd fuck her in any number of positions; she was always tight and hot and soaking wet for him. Occasionally she'd even let him take her up the arse (although Ron still hadn't decided if he really had any interest in that). Tonks was always ready and willing for anything Ron had in mind.

No matter what the fantasy, it always ended the same, with Ron coming hard and fast, hot spurts of spunk splattering into the palm of his lotion slickened fist. He'd collapse against the mattress, panting and spent, but utterly sated. At least for a few minutes. Then he'd do a quick clean up with a wad of tissues, almost always recovered and was ready for a second round.

And a third.

And a fourth.

And every time Tonks would be there in his imagination, begging him for more, more, more.
28th March 2017 19:35 - Re: Fill: Only A Dream Away (Fantasy) (2/2)
HOLY FUCKING SHIT!

THAT WAS SO DELICIOUS!

Imagining teenagers waking shouldn't be that got, right? But then I realized, it wasn't Ron that was turning me on, it was his imagining of Tonks. HOLY FUCK SHE'S HAWT! Of course she is, she's your Tonks. ♥ ♥

What I loved the most was how she seeped into his psyche despite all he thought made an *ideal* woman. How he liked that she could be anything but he really just wanted her as she was. ♥ My sweet cinnamon roll!
28th March 2017 19:38 - Re: Fill: Only A Dream Away (Fantasy) (2/2)
*hot not got.

Damn you IJ's lack of editing function and leaving comments on my phone. :(

Anyway, thanks again for this amazing!
28th March 2017 22:00 - Re: Fill: Only A Dream Away (Fantasy) (2/2)
*mwah* Anything for you, my darling! I'm just really glad it worked. I was really surprised that this thing pretty much wrote itself in my head so I wasn't struggling with it for days/weeks/months/years.

Imagining real teenagers wanking probably isn't very sexy, but this is RON we're talking about. ;) For some reason his cluelessness and inexperience is a kink in itself for me. (TMI?)

He is a little cinnamon roll - and it was really fun to have him think of her that way. It's almost like "My funny Valentine" where she's not perfect at all, but 'don't change a hair for me, not if you care for me' because he wants her as is. Plus she could do all these things or be all these other girls, but down deep, she's pretty hot on her own. Despite his protests to the contrary. ♥

As always I am so happy you are pleased!

And HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
29th March 2017 14:10 - Re: Fill: Only A Dream Away (Fantasy) (2/2)
This is totally charming and sexy. His inexperience and how he's still learning and exploring his desires... you wrote that in a way that's very sweet and made me happy. :D
29th March 2017 15:53 - Re: Fill: Only A Dream Away (Fantasy) (2/2)
Aw, thanks, doll! I appreciate the kind words. It was fun and given how little experience Ron had in canon, it was fun to play with. Now I just have to make sure I don't write the same thing for you! :D (It definitely will not be Ron!)
29th March 2017 21:22 - Re: Fill: Only A Dream Away (Fantasy) (2/2)
Ooo, this was great! Loved Ron's voice here, and the way you wrote his lack of experience. I definitely got the horny teenage boy vibes here. :D
2nd April 2017 16:13 - Re: Fill: Only A Dream Away (Fantasy) (2/2)
Thanks so much! It scares me that it's easier to write as a teenage boy than pretty much anyone else. I'm pretty sure I don't have one trapped inside of me, but sometimes I wonder! :D
30th March 2017 10:19 - Re: Fill: Only A Dream Away (Fantasy) (2/2)
...now I want Tonks, too!! Lovely!
2nd April 2017 16:13 - Re: Fill: Only A Dream Away (Fantasy) (2/2)
I pretty much always want her! I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you! (Why am I using so many exclamation points? :))
31st March 2017 07:23 - Re: Fill: Only A Dream Away (Fantasy) (2/2)
This is brilliant! Gods, Tonks is fabulous in this even though she's mostly in Ron's imagination. But it's so convincing, and Ron with his "well, no one would look at her" lies and the teen bluster about everything is just perfectly written.
2nd April 2017 16:14 - Re: Fill: Only A Dream Away (Fantasy) (2/2)
Aw, thanks, sweetie. You know I always love to get praise from you. ♥ I always love writing Ron because he's such a loveable idiot (to me) and very good at being in denial about things.
1st April 2017 12:07 - Re: Fill: Only A Dream Away (Fantasy) (2/2)
Hot and sort of sweetly innocent.
Ron's certainly got an active imagination (which totally makes sense for a 15 year old), and love his quick refractory time, also likely quite accurate. *g*
Also, the Tonks in his head is dead sexy. Yowza!
Great job!
2nd April 2017 16:15 - Re: Fill: Only A Dream Away (Fantasy) (2/2)
Thanks so much, doll. I'm so glad you liked it. ♥ Sometimes it scares me how easily the mind of a 15-16 year boy is for me to bore into. LOL
6th April 2017 16:14 - Re: Fill: Only A Dream Away (Fantasy) (2/2)
Okay, I always feel weird for saying this, but I don't normally do het...

BUT I'm so glad I made an exception for this because IT'S SO GOOD.

Ron is (admittedly) one of my weaknesses, and a pervy chronic wanker Ron gets me every single time. I loved how he kind of tried to deny his feelings for her, and how that didn't stop him from coming back for seconds...and thirds...and fourths. ;) Haha! Excellent work, well done!
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