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FIC -- "Tasting the Tempest" (Wilhelmina Grubbly-Plank; R) 
15th February 2012 23:58
Title: Tasting the Tempest
Author: [info]kelly_chambliss
Characters: Wilhelmina Grubbly-Plank
Rating: R
Kinks/Themes Chosen: ceraunophilia: arousal by thunder and lightning/storms
Other Warnings: none
Word Count: 1200
Summary: One evening while Wilhelmina is tending to her animals, a storm blows up.
Author's Notes: One year ago today, I posted my first Daily Deviant story. It's been a fun and kinky ride so far; thanks for reading.

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The animals always feel it first. The unicorns begin to paw the ground in their pens; the crups circle and whine; the owls flutter on their perches. In the shadows of the woods, thestrals stomp and whinny.

Wilhelmina Grubbly-Plank watches from the stable door, the evening's feeding schedule and stall-cleaning forgotten. She stands unmoving, listening to the beasts and waiting for her less-acute human senses to register what the animals have already told her: a magical storm is coming.

She knows that she'll feel it first against her skin, a sensation of heat and chill at the same time, so intense that she always sneezes with the strength of it.

She waits, and. . .ah, here it comes: that first tingle of magic as the breeze picks up, the air becoming almost palpable, so that Wilhelmina likes to fancy that she could open her mouth and take a bite of the wind itself. As a child, she had been certain she'd know exactly how it would taste: like the spiciest of candied ginger, like burnt sugar, like honeyed lemon.

It hadn't, of course; that had been just a child's fantasy. Yet she had not been wrong about the burning sweetness of the storm. The child Wilhelmina may not have eaten the air, but the grown-up Wilhelmina has found other ways to taste the tempest.

The sky darkens. Black clouds roil along the horizon, flashes of magic zigzagging from their undersides like lightning, except that it's not quite the same. This is no ordinary Muggle storm, though the Muggles in the neighborhood may soon be unfurling their umbrellas against a sudden squall of unexpected rain. A brief downpour, perhaps a roll of thunder and a gust of strong wind, but nothing more.

But for those magical folk like Wilhelmina, those few who have the storm sense, the world is about to crack wide open.

The wind begins to eddy beneath her robes, tendrils of magic chasing themselves over her ankles, along her calves and up her thighs. She's wearing sturdy boots and the thickest of black lisle stockings, for the evenings can still be nippy this far into the highlands, even at the approach of summer, but she might as well be naked, so powerful is the magical current against her skin.

Wilhelmina steps out further into the stable-yard, her crups yipping excitedly at her feet. The unicorns, too, have become more agitated; their hooves send sharp golden flakes of magic into the air as they beat the ground.

The first time she'd seen unicorns during a magic storm, she had thought they were frightened. They're timid creatures at the best of times, and Wilhelmina, who had just been starting her training as an apprentice animal healer, had entered their pens to try to calm them.

Her mentor had stopped her. "Nay, lass," Master Greenwald had said. "Leave them be. It's their element, don't you see? Look at them."

Wilhelmina had looked. The unicorns, she had realised, were not frightened at all, but excited. They'd been bleating eagerly, their hooves sending out fire just as they were tonight; they'd been nudging each other with their horns, which Wilhelmina's textbook had told her they did when they were about to mate. . .

Oh.

They were mating. All of them. She'd watched as buck mounted doe, and buck mounted buck, and doe nuzzled doe with a mutual rubbing of horns. Their pleasure had been obvious.

She had known, of course, that unicorns were pansexual, but she had never seen them in action; they were notoriously shy about such things around humans. It had been an amazing spectacle; Wilhelmina had been moved, and definitely aroused, though needless to say, she had concealed that fact from her mentor.

Master Greenwald had nodded approvingly. "You've the gift, lass. You're a storm-catcher; that's rare, you know. But the beasts know you. They always know."

Yes. He'd been right: they always know. Tonight, as the storm grows, their ardent bleating begins, and Wilhelmina feels her own arousal begin to build.

She turns away from the unicorn pen to watch the horizon again. The storm has drawn nearer.

The clouds are piled high now, pulsing like a living thing, magic stlll flashing jaggedly underneath. The slashes of light dazzle with colour -- red, vivid purple, a green ten times brighter than any killing curse. Bolts fork from the clouds to the ground, the colours running in rapid, fiery streams along the landscape.

The lightning is following veins that run deep into the earth, the bloodstream of the magical world. Occasionally a streak will reach a pocket of pooled magic, and it will ignite; the night air turns brilliant with blue fireballs and the muffled boom of explosions. Sparks shower down onto the earth, which glows with enchantment re-absorbed, the elements reclaiming themselves.

Wilhelmina breathes deeply, inhaling the sharp ozone scent of magic. She feels the rush of it to her very core; arousal throbs deep within her, and she begins to hum softly with the pleasure of it.

To her left, a small bush near the paddock fence flares blue, the cold fire doing no damage to the wood. But the residue of its magic reaches her, and she shivers, the hairs on her neck rising as the storm fully breaks over her at last, not with rain, but with raw energy that she can almost taste, almost see, almost. . .

She flings off her robes and underthings, baring her breasts to the metallic air and planting her naked legs wide. The swirling magic cools the damp thatch between her thighs at the same time that it heats her. With her eyes closed, she can feel the enchantment like a lover's fingers inside her, thrusting and stroking.

The light behind her eyes is golden, and the sounds of storm and animals reach her like music and the rhythm of the elements is pounding within her, and Wilhelmina is coming, coming, and it feels, somehow, the way sweetness tastes, and she's coming, shouting, throwing back her head and adding her own voice to the howling untamed thunder that is magic.

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Its power spent, the storm passes quickly. Wilhelmina feels the softness of ordinary air settle around her once more as she gathers her robes from the ground and slips them quickly over her head. It won't do to catch a chill; at the moment, her boarding kennels are full to capacity with various magical creatures, and she needs to be fit and strong to look after them all.

The unicorns are milling placidly about their pen now, waiting for her to serve their interrupted supper. Her crups, Wilhelmina notes with a smile, are also standing near their food bowls, looking at her with forked tails wagging hopefully.

"All right, greedies," she says, laughing, and heads towards the storage shed with its chow barrel. She knows she won't be eating any dinner of her own; she's full to bursting with new magic.

By the time she reaches shed door, the clouds have disappeared, and the evening sun once again slants into the stable-yard.
Comments 
16th February 2012 14:13
Oh this is excellent. You create a wonderful atmosphere, and your magic storm is a thing of beauty.

I love the pansexual unicorns, and:

so that Wilhelmina likes to fancy that she could open her mouth and take a bite of the wind itself. As a child, she had been certain she'd know exactly how it would taste: like the spiciest of candied ginger, like burnt sugar, like honeyed lemon.

Wonderful portrayal of Wilhelmina!
16th February 2012 16:38
Thank you! I love writing Wilhelmina, and I'm glad you like this version of her. And her animals /g/.
17th February 2012 01:15
So atmospheric and lovely! I like this glimpse into Wilhelmina very much.
17th February 2012 06:11
Thanks! -- for reading and for the QR rec. Glad you enjoyed it.
17th February 2012 12:15
like the spiciest of candied ginger, like burnt sugar, like honeyed lemon. I can just see how a storm would be like that - a juxtaposition of two seemingly opposite tastes.

She flings off her robes, baring her breasts to the metallic air and planting her naked legs wide. Great line. Love the use of 'planting' for Wilhelmina, rather than 'spreading'.

The light behind her eyes is golden, and the sounds of storm and animals reach her like music and the rhythm of the elements is pounding within her, and Wilhelmina is coming, coming, and it feels, somehow, the way sweetness tastes, and she's coming, shouting, throwing back her head and adding her own voice to the howling untamed thunder that is magic.
Brilliant ... erm ... climax to this story.
18th February 2012 20:06
Ha! Yes, it is quite a climax, isn't it? Thanks for reading and quoting, my dear.
17th February 2012 21:28
An entirely new slant on "riding the storm".

L
18th February 2012 20:08
Haha! Indeed.

Thanks fo reading.
18th February 2012 22:29
Yo' welcome, homegirl. ;)
L
18th February 2012 22:32
Jeez. Damn sticky keyboard /g/
18th February 2012 01:10
A magical storm...what a wonderful idea and you've written about it in such a way that I could almost feel it (or so I liked to imagine *g*)

Wilhelmina's surrender to it is wonderful, she is so one with the earth, animals, magic....it feels really like her to want to sense it with her full, naked, being and have the immense power of the storm express itself in her orgasm.

Reading this fic, awoke my senses and energy vigorously and I loved it! Oh, how I long for a summer's thunderstorm now - even without the magic (though magic they're always).

18th February 2012 17:35
Some of the lines I especially noted...

The sky darkens. Black clouds roil along the horizon, flashes of magic zigzagging from their undersides like lightning, except that it's not quite the same. This is no ordinary Muggle storm, though the Muggles in the neighborhood may soon be unfurling their umbrellas against a sudden squall of unexpected rain. A brief downpour, perhaps a roll of thunder and a gust of strong wind, but nothing more.

But for those magical folk like Wilhelmina, those few who have the storm sense, the world is about to crack wide open.


Ohh, how could one escape arousal with this happening, yet I imagine only receptive people, like Wilhelmina, would even notice such effects on their body: The wind begins to eddy beneath her robes, tendrils of magic chasing themselves over her ankles, along her calves and up her thighs. She's wearing sturdy boots and the thickest of black lisle stockings, for the evenings can still be nippy this far into the highlands, even at the approach of summer, but she might as well be naked, so powerful is the magical current against her skin.

So true, for the real animal/nature people and I can see the trainer say it: "You've the gift, lass. You're a storm-catcher; that's rare, you know. But the beasts know you. They always know."

Such lines, poetical, yet very apt in their description, made me feel your magical storm and the details which differ from a normal thunderstorm are beautiful and inventive...the green...
The clouds are piled high now, pulsing like a living thing, magic stlll flashing jaggedly underneath. The slashes of light dazzle with colour -- red, vivid purple, a green ten times brighter than any killing curse. Bolts fork from the clouds to the ground, the colours running in rapid, fiery streams along the landscape.

The lightning is following veins that run deep into the earth, the bloodstream of the magical world. Occasionally a streak will reach a pocket of pooled magic, and it will ignite; the night air turns brilliant with blue fireballs and the muffled boom of explosions. Sparks shower down onto the earth, which glows with enchantment re-absorbed, the elements reclaiming themselves.


And here, how strong, down to earth, yet completely unconventional and intensely alive...your Wilhelmina:
She flings off her robes, baring her breasts to the metallic air and planting her naked legs wide. The swirling magic cools the damp thatch between her thighs at the same time that it heats her. With her eyes closed, she can feel the enchantment like a lover's fingers inside her, thrusting and stroking.

The light behind her eyes is golden, and the sounds of storm and animals reach her like music and the rhythm of the elements is pounding within her, and Wilhelmina is coming, coming, and it feels, somehow, the way sweetness tastes, and she's coming, shouting, throwing back her head and adding her own voice to the howling untamed thunder that is magic.


Ahh, just a small story bout a magical storm, and yet, and yet...

18th February 2012 20:10
Thank you so much for the detailed, perceptive comment! I so appreciate it. I'm really glad you enjoyed the story. As soon as I saw this month's kink, it said "Wilhelmina" to me.

"Unconventional and alive" -- that's exactly how I wanted to present her.
22nd February 2012 19:43
What a gorgeous story! I love the way the magic of the storm speaks to all the magical creatures, especially Wilhelmina. :)
Lovely!
24th February 2012 01:39
Thanks! I had a lot of fun imagining the storm.
2nd March 2012 08:31
This is beautifully done. I really love that you used the theme so completely. I also loved the descriptions and Wilhelmina's spirit.
3rd March 2012 03:21
Glad you enjoyed it; the kink was fun to write.

Thanks for reading!
29th January 2013 22:42
Wilhelmina Grubbly-Plank watches from the stable door, the evening's feeding schedule and stall-cleaning forgotten.
I love all the imagery here (including the critters above), especially as quite the lover of storms myself. The sneeze is a great touch. Grinning at little Wilhelmina trying to bite the breezes and the 'tasting of the tempest' we'll soon see from the grown-up Wilhelmina.

The wind begins to eddy beneath her robes, tendrils of magic chasing themselves over her ankles, along her calves and up her thighs.
Ooooooeeeeerrrr to the wole paragraph (including, of course, the sturdy boots ♥).

Love the touch of the unicorns' hooves sending flakes of magic into the air.

they'd been nudging each other with their horns, which Wilhelmina's textbook had told her they did when they were about to mate. . . / Oh.
Ahahahahaha. Grinning at half-grown Wilhelmina, here, too. Glad to see the unicorns don't discriminate.

Mmmm lovely storm section. Wonderful thing to experience, that.

Perfect earthy Wilhelmina who can join in with the living and elemental world in a way few (perhaps Pomona and some others, in different ways) might understand. I always fangirl elemental-type magic, especially when it's seen as more of a life-force and can be experienced in many different (sometimes unconventional) ways.

"All right, greedies," she says, laughing, and heads towards the storage shed with its chow barrel.
And back for the perfect ending. One knows the world is still turning when there are hungry creatures forever waiting to be fed.

Now I'm disappointed that all I've got outside is a few occasional drops of rain. I'll be waiting for the next proper storm.
30th January 2013 04:01
Ah, lovely -- a patented Kiwi special, my favorite kind of review. Thank you for the detailed thoughts, my dear. I'm glad you can appreciate Wilhelmina as she deserves to be appreciated!
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