You + Ron's freckles = too glorious to look at directly.... you will ever school me at those.
I love the color choices, texture, and the sketchy, loose quality. Hermione has a lovely body and I dig that navel... nice navel... Ron is wonderfully canon thin and I dig his still dressed-ness :) It's very focussy on her... Yes, I am inventing new words in English, just to talk about this piece properly :D
Anyway, aside from the technical stuff, which I always enjoy so much, it's damn hot. Go you :D
Seriously lovely and sexy and full of emotion. *sigh*