Lovely writing in this piece -- the repetitions and the structure and the punctuation, not always strictly correct by all the rules but that resonates with the story itself, since they are after all breaking many rules (and when Percy does that it Means Something).
Lovely writing in this piece -- the repetitions and the structure and the punctuation, not always strictly correct by all the rules but that resonates with the story itself, since they are after all breaking many rules (and when Percy does that it Means Something).
Heart-wrenchingly almost-hopeful. ♥ very much.