Oh, wow, this is brilliant. The recurring color theme/the brown of Remus' eyes is beautiful. You've kept up the intensity through this whole piece, really bringing it to a climax (no pun intended) during the sex scene.
This line: You know, your eyes are about the same colour when you're pissed off at me as when you're about to come? A testament to Sirius' big mouth how long these two have known each other.
I'd be much more into Remus/Sirius if more of it was written like this. ;)
This line: You know, your eyes are about the same colour when you're pissed off at me as when you're about to come? A testament to
Sirius' big mouthhow long these two have known each other.I'd be much more into Remus/Sirius if more of it was written like this. ;)