I like it. I love the way you wrote the characters, Draco as spoilt and funny brat, Severus as caring underneath his hard shell. Interesting version of the Tom thumb theme.
Just a tiny bit of nitpicking: Unfortunate, Draco Malfoy was a healthy seventeen year old boy. It should be 'unfortunately', should it not?
Just a tiny bit of nitpicking: Unfortunate, Draco Malfoy was a healthy seventeen year old boy. It should be 'unfortunately', should it not?