My God, you are good. Like, really good. Amazingly good. This is erotica at its very best, if you ask me: perfectly paced and plotted, sex conveying so much characterisation, and steaming hot besides. You are just - alskdgjs - so, SO good at this, I can't even tell you.
Loved the whole thing to pieces, but two details that stood out?
There is no doubt what he must look like, wearing nothing but the white shirt that's slipped off his shoulders and the school tie knotted loosely at his throat; pinned beneath Sirius Black with his thighs spread and his prick sliding through the come that's still drying on his stomach.
and -
The ever present dog tags jingle when they fall back into place, and he pushes them over his shoulder with a careless flick of his hand.
Such gorgeous visuals! And of course the dog tags at the end. a;lskdjg. Oh, boys! It takes great talent to do this pairing with real emotion behind it beyond hate, but you've done it brilliantly. :)
Loved the whole thing to pieces, but two details that stood out?
There is no doubt what he must look like, wearing nothing but the white shirt that's slipped off his shoulders and the school tie knotted loosely at his throat; pinned beneath Sirius Black with his thighs spread and his prick sliding through the come that's still drying on his stomach.
and -
The ever present dog tags jingle when they fall back into place, and he pushes them over his shoulder with a careless flick of his hand.
Such gorgeous visuals! And of course the dog tags at the end. a;lskdjg. Oh, boys! It takes great talent to do this pairing with real emotion behind it beyond hate, but you've done it brilliantly. :)