I love this so, so much. I love it from the first line paragraph to the end!
James had always been miserable as an Alpha. Mostly because he was crap at it.
I love him he sounds so desolate about the whole thing. And then he goesn on and on about his stupid Alpha spunk (LOL) and he's stupid good-at-it Alpha dad, and yeah, of course that little shit of Al makes fun of him and I just want to hug and protect James Sirius Potter for ever and ever. <3333
I mean, he's got it so hard and then this one day—GOD, I love that he's not decided what Scorpius smells like, it's food, it's forrest, it's all good things at the same time and I just adore he hesitates and makes totally sure it's OK to go ahead.
"Do what?" It's not that James didn't know. It's only that… well, one wouldn't want to be wrong about such things. He gulped.
Awwww. But it's LOL! XD
I love that Scorpius has this attitude of, Damnit, get it together Potter! HAHAHAHA. I totally can read that between the lines and then, and then we discover it's his first time too and of course it is. :)
"Salazar, why does it have to be you?" Scorpius complained under his breath. "All smoking Quidditch body and no brains."
"Oi!" James barked. Though smoking Quidditch body still rang through his skull rather pleasantly. "I have Outstandings in--"
"I'm sorry. Okay?" Scorpius was all but panting for it now, taking down his pants. "You're brilliant," he placated. "Forgive me if that's not what I'm interested in right now."
I love how Malfoyian he sounds. I mean, Draco would be SO proud of him! I love that attitude in Scorpius, and just, as the story unfolds he see this super tender side of him. I love him needy and demanding, but I love him comforting to James just as much.
And ohhhhhhh, I gotta stop and make a point to THANK YOU SO MUCH for the description of Scorpius's cock. It was so lovely.
And then when James goes in rut and we see their relationship become a relationship, shift to become into this gentle, sweet thing, because they deserve that. Aside from how intense it all was, they are just boys, and it was beautiful to see that side as well.
My OTP, such an amazing fic exploring A/B/O dynamics. I love you so much for writing this. :D :D :D :D See? They are perfect together! *happy sigh*
James had always been miserable as an Alpha. Mostly because he was crap at it.
I love him he sounds so desolate about the whole thing. And then he goesn on and on about his stupid Alpha spunk (LOL) and he's stupid good-at-it Alpha dad, and yeah, of course that little shit of Al makes fun of him and I just want to hug and protect James Sirius Potter for ever and ever. <3333
I mean, he's got it so hard and then this one day—GOD, I love that he's not decided what Scorpius smells like, it's food, it's forrest, it's all good things at the same time and I just adore he hesitates and makes totally sure it's OK to go ahead.
"Do what?" It's not that James didn't know. It's only that… well, one wouldn't want to be wrong about such things. He gulped.
Awwww. But it's LOL! XD
I love that Scorpius has this attitude of, Damnit, get it together Potter! HAHAHAHA. I totally can read that between the lines and then, and then we discover it's his first time too and of course it is. :)
"Salazar, why does it have to be you?" Scorpius complained under his breath. "All smoking Quidditch body and no brains."
"Oi!" James barked. Though smoking Quidditch body still rang through his skull rather pleasantly. "I have Outstandings in--"
"I'm sorry. Okay?" Scorpius was all but panting for it now, taking down his pants. "You're brilliant," he placated. "Forgive me if that's not what I'm interested in right now."
I love how Malfoyian he sounds. I mean, Draco would be SO proud of him! I love that attitude in Scorpius, and just, as the story unfolds he see this super tender side of him. I love him needy and demanding, but I love him comforting to James just as much.
And ohhhhhhh, I gotta stop and make a point to THANK YOU SO MUCH for the description of Scorpius's cock. It was so lovely.
And then when James goes in rut and we see their relationship become a relationship, shift to become into this gentle, sweet thing, because they deserve that. Aside from how intense it all was, they are just boys, and it was beautiful to see that side as well.
My OTP, such an amazing fic exploring A/B/O dynamics. I love you so much for writing this. :D :D :D :D See? They are perfect together! *happy sigh*