Obviously, you got me to look again. ;-) I love it even more now. I mean, I saw the writing last time, but my eye took in the left side and then didn't register that the right has devolved entirely into "I must not fuck Harry Potter!" Omg LOVE! I adore how you flipped the 'lines' part of the detention trope there! It's genius!
I really love everything about this: Harry's face with its innocence and trepidation, the corset (unf!), the fact that Harry is, ahem, enjoying it, his sweet little bum!!!, Snape's perverse giving in to his own desires (but only in punishment form because that's still proper, right? LOL). I love the portent of the cane under his arm as well. What a great job, Kat!
I really love everything about this: Harry's face with its innocence and trepidation, the corset (unf!), the fact that Harry is, ahem, enjoying it, his sweet little bum!!!, Snape's perverse giving in to his own desires (but only in punishment form because that's still proper, right? LOL). I love the portent of the cane under his arm as well. What a great job, Kat!
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