Unf. This was so cleverly written, I am in awe. :) First, the way you added detail after detail was excellent. We have no idea if Al and James want each other, but Hugo certainly believes it, so he made me buy it, too. And the lush descriptions were gorgeously done. And then the building sensuality. First the plug, then the evolving fantasy including James and Al and even Harry... *shakes head* Really fabulous! Great job!
This was so cleverly written, I am in awe. :)
First, the way you added detail after detail was excellent. We have no idea if Al and James want each other, but Hugo certainly believes it, so he made me buy it, too.
And the lush descriptions were gorgeously done.
And then the building sensuality. First the plug, then the evolving fantasy including James and Al and even Harry...
*shakes head*
Really fabulous! Great job!