Haha, nice opening line! Given that this is a KK fic especially, the reader's expectation for what that means are... something entirely different from what it turns out to be. :P Either way, it definitely gets one intrigued from the get-go.
And maybe he had meant to confound the man in the men's loo and switch slips. But it wasn't like Harkney would mind. Or even know that he could have possibly minded. -- LOL! That is awesome. All of Harry's justifications are hilarious here. Oh, Harry. Your Slytherin streak is showing...
Asking Ron, who'd only been told out of desperation, got a "Dunno, mate. Something thick and hardbound? -- Oh, man, that's so Ron!
And Luna is so Luna. And Harry is so Harry.
He made a face at it. Damn judging, knitted reindeer. -- Just, LOOOOL!
Ohh, nice inclusion of Crookshanks! Now that I think about it, I've almost never seen anyone think to include him/his presence in fic.
"I was wondering how long that would take you." -- And Hermione is so Hermione! "Obviously she'd known," indeed. *sporfle*
I love the way you've characterized everyone here and all the interaction between them. Harry's utter bafflement with this entire situation, and the way Hermione never misses a beat.
"You're sure...?" -- Yes, I'm pretty certain she's sure, Harry. :P She most definitely is in charge, and Harry wouldn't have it any other way, and neither would we. Because in charge!Hermione is holy shit, hot! Guh!
This sort of wild, uncontrolled, "need it now" smut is my utterly bullet-proof kink, and you've hit the kink right on the head here. Intense and hot and well-characterized and funny in the right places and totally smokin' in all the right ways. All-around fab sexy piece!
And maybe he had meant to confound the man in the men's loo and switch slips. But it wasn't like Harkney would mind. Or even know that he could have possibly minded. -- LOL! That is awesome. All of Harry's justifications are hilarious here. Oh, Harry. Your Slytherin streak is showing...
Asking Ron, who'd only been told out of desperation, got a "Dunno, mate. Something thick and hardbound? -- Oh, man, that's so Ron!
And Luna is so Luna. And Harry is so Harry.
He made a face at it. Damn judging, knitted reindeer. -- Just, LOOOOL!
Ohh, nice inclusion of Crookshanks! Now that I think about it, I've almost never seen anyone think to include him/his presence in fic.
"I was wondering how long that would take you." -- And Hermione is so Hermione! "Obviously she'd known," indeed. *sporfle*
I love the way you've characterized everyone here and all the interaction between them. Harry's utter bafflement with this entire situation, and the way Hermione never misses a beat.
"You're sure...?" -- Yes, I'm pretty certain she's sure, Harry. :P She most definitely is in charge, and Harry wouldn't have it any other way, and neither would we. Because in charge!Hermione is holy shit, hot! Guh!
This sort of wild, uncontrolled, "need it now" smut is my utterly bullet-proof kink, and you've hit the kink right on the head here. Intense and hot and well-characterized and funny in the right places and totally smokin' in all the right ways. All-around fab sexy piece!