Hahaha, I cracked up over the almost offhanded observations about Ernie's behavior and Draco's total dismissal of him. Quite a clear contrast between the two men. Gee, I can't imagine why Lily would prefer Draco... *snerk*
And then the little details about Fairweather; his cynical/brusque speech, his motions, his ability to hold his liquor -- or at least sober up in a hurry if need be. You've developed a characterization in two paragraphs. How?? LOL
“I’m your assistant,” she reminds him pertly, “so I will do what I should do: assist.” -- Ha, love it! Or love her, maybe. :P
“With two of us, we’ll get it done in half the time,” she says reasonably. -- Is that your way of suggesting a "quickie," Lily? Oh, wait... It pretty much is...
“And if I remind you that I’m happily married?”
“I might remind you that I don’t care if you don’t,” -- Yep, I definitely love her. XD
Hnnnngh, okay, Lily is one seriously hot woman, and nothing short of being flamingly gay ought to be able to stop Draco from taking her up on that offer of hers. He had no chance! But then again, neither did she...
She squirms, trying to add pressure, and he slides his other hand down, cups her bum and pulls her closer between his legs. She nestles as close as she can, rocking against the hard ridge in his trousers. -- [You have reached Rowan's brain's voice mail. Rowan's brain is not available right now due to having exploded.]
Oh, MAN, these two are just perfectly well matched! LOL Each of them is every bit as cocky and daring as the other. Their continual back-and-forth challenging of each other is so well played. So sexy and dirty, and the infidelity aspect makes it that much hotter -- both for them and for the reader. This fic makes me feel kind of twisted for cheering for adultery and loving every minute of it. ;D
And then the little details about Fairweather; his cynical/brusque speech, his motions, his ability to hold his liquor -- or at least sober up in a hurry if need be. You've developed a characterization in two paragraphs. How?? LOL
“I’m your assistant,” she reminds him pertly, “so I will do what I should do: assist.” -- Ha, love it! Or love her, maybe. :P
“With two of us, we’ll get it done in half the time,” she says reasonably. -- Is that your way of suggesting a "quickie," Lily? Oh, wait... It pretty much is...
“And if I remind you that I’m happily married?”
“I might remind you that I don’t care if you don’t,” -- Yep, I definitely love her. XD
Hnnnngh, okay, Lily is one seriously hot woman, and nothing short of being flamingly gay ought to be able to stop Draco from taking her up on that offer of hers. He had no chance! But then again, neither did she...
She squirms, trying to add pressure, and he slides his other hand down, cups her bum and pulls her closer between his legs. She nestles as close as she can, rocking against the hard ridge in his trousers. -- [You have reached Rowan's brain's voice mail. Rowan's brain is not available right now due to having exploded.]
Oh, MAN, these two are just perfectly well matched! LOL Each of them is every bit as cocky and daring as the other. Their continual back-and-forth challenging of each other is so well played. So sexy and dirty, and the infidelity aspect makes it that much hotter -- both for them and for the reader. This fic makes me feel kind of twisted for cheering for adultery and loving every minute of it. ;D