I'll tell you, "Is it going to spurt inside like last time?" was this line where I was like, "Oh my god, is this going to be too much?" But my own response to it was pretty much Harry's -- so I just put it in and let Harry respond like I basically did! LOLOL! I'm so super thrilled to hear that you liked that part in particular, because I think it's one of my favorites as well. I'm glad I didn't back off of it!
And to fall into DADDY KINK of all things without really talking about it.
Oh thank you, thank you, THANK YOU! You have a real knack for identifying and articulating why a story works, and that's awesome to get as a writer! I love that about their dynamic, too. I sort of tried to imply that in that moment when Teddy just asks, "Daddy?" And Harry replies, "Yes?" like he is that... even though he's so NOT that, and that's, like, WHY it's hot, that they don't even know WHAT it is. Omg, you did a much better job of talking about why you think it works! *snort*
GOD, HARRY, JUST TALK TO THE KID OKAY.
Omg right?! But it hurts sooooo goooood that he can't! ;-) :-D <3
I appreciate this so much, Lee! I love writing this kink for these two, more than any other pairing; it just works for me so satisfyingly. And I'm THRILLED that all that I wanted from it came across to you like it did! Thanks so much for letting me know! ♥
I'll tell you, "Is it going to spurt inside like last time?" was this line where I was like, "Oh my god, is this going to be too much?" But my own response to it was pretty much Harry's -- so I just put it in and let Harry respond like I basically did! LOLOL! I'm so super thrilled to hear that you liked that part in particular, because I think it's one of my favorites as well. I'm glad I didn't back off of it!
And to fall into DADDY KINK of all things without really talking about it.
Oh thank you, thank you, THANK YOU! You have a real knack for identifying and articulating why a story works, and that's awesome to get as a writer! I love that about their dynamic, too. I sort of tried to imply that in that moment when Teddy just asks, "Daddy?" And Harry replies, "Yes?" like he is that... even though he's so NOT that, and that's, like, WHY it's hot, that they don't even know WHAT it is. Omg, you did a much better job of talking about why you think it works! *snort*
GOD, HARRY, JUST TALK TO THE KID OKAY.
Omg right?! But it hurts sooooo goooood that he can't! ;-) :-D <3
I appreciate this so much, Lee! I love writing this kink for these two, more than any other pairing; it just works for me so satisfyingly. And I'm THRILLED that all that I wanted from it came across to you like it did! Thanks so much for letting me know! ♥