What strikes me the most about this, I think, is the color palette. You've done a brilliant job of capturing the cool grayness of a winter day -- the way not just the sky, but everything grays out in the middle of winter. It makes the pink of their cheeks and noses and ears (and Charlie's ass and their... yeah) all the more vivid. I can feel this piece -- the chill of the air on exposed skin, the heat under the clothing and the places where their bodies are connected, the hot breath. That sensation of the internal body temperature being high and being covered in a layer of sweat while the skin surface is chilled. (Now I want to turn my space heater on. :P)
They don't seem like they mind the cold at all, though -- and it ain't 'cause they have warming charms. ;D The closed eyes and enraptured expressions. Their fingers digging into each other's clothes. Love the sharp, almost talon-like look of Charlie's grip and the sense of possessiveness it creates. Remus is fantastically haggard and worn-looking here, and somehow I get the sense that Charlie is drawn to that.
And of course this hits my kink buttons and is totally hot. :P Frantic, half-dressed frotting without giving a damn where they are always kills me dead. Nnnnghf!! Happy holidays indeed. XD
They don't seem like they mind the cold at all, though -- and it ain't 'cause they have warming charms. ;D The closed eyes and enraptured expressions. Their fingers digging into each other's clothes. Love the sharp, almost talon-like look of Charlie's grip and the sense of possessiveness it creates. Remus is fantastically haggard and worn-looking here, and somehow I get the sense that Charlie is drawn to that.
And of course this hits my kink buttons and is totally hot. :P Frantic, half-dressed frotting without giving a damn where they are always kills me dead. Nnnnghf!! Happy holidays indeed. XD