Thank you so much for your detailed and thoughtful comment! I'm really pleased to hear that the contrast between Albus' accomplishments and his naivety came through as intended, here.
Yes, I can just hear Albus here, showing off his ability with words even as one part of him is thinking that he doesn't have words.
It's great to hear that came through - exactly the sort of tension I was trying to create.
Love the reference to Horace and Elphias, too.
Thank you! A shout-out for one of my favourite rare-pairs ;-)
Yes, I can just hear Albus here, showing off his ability with words even as one part of him is thinking that he doesn't have words.
It's great to hear that came through - exactly the sort of tension I was trying to create.
Love the reference to Horace and Elphias, too.
Thank you! A shout-out for one of my favourite rare-pairs ;-)
PurpleFluffyCat x