Daily Deviant
- there is no such thing as 'too kinky'
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12th December 2016 13:21
You've conveyed so very well how into this "game" both Albus and Scorpius are. And I love that Teddy has picked up on that and isn't shy about becoming a participant. And James! Fantastic way you snuck him in there -- for both Scorpius and us voyeurs
readers.

“Like you could ever be jealous of anyone with that big ego of yours,” James teases, hand dropping from Scorpius’s face as he stalks over to Teddy. -- Great little insertion of a lot of characterization of both of them.

“Tell me what you want.” Teddy pulls back slightly, his lips brushing against Scorpius’s arse.

“He wants you to fuck him,” James cheekily supplies.

“I didn’t ask you,” Teddy replies wryly, his thumb pressing against Scorpius’s fluttering hole.
-- James... *sporfle*

Amazing job with all the dynamics here, between each couple, between the brothers, and between the entire foursome together. This whole thing is just so unrelentingly intense, and dirty-wrong yet comfortable at the same time. Seriously, I have no idea how you pulled that off. Really, really well done.
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