This is absolutely perfect, because this is so totally, exactly the sort of thing these two would get up to in their teenage years. Or maybe I should say that your characterizations of them are perfect -- too cocky (and full of hormones) to be afraid of anything.
Hahaha, advantisexual! That's a very Sirius term indeed. XD And this: Professor Sinistra, the teacher in question, has never quite forgiven him. Sirius doesn’t care. is utterly teenage Sirius as well.
There are just SO MANY great little details in here... James' writing going wonky and then him doing a piss-poor job of pretending to write lines once Sirius' hand is on his cock. Sirius' wicked amusement at James' discomposure. How well they know each other and the way that Sirius can read the slightest change in James' expression. James pushing up his glasses as a habitual/frustrated motion. The written banter and the underlying meaning. James' determination to get revenge -- and Sirius' anticipation of it.
And I really, really like the little bit that tells us that Sirius does have limits -- and more for James' sake than his own. He doesn't want to get James into real trouble or, more significantly, to see him humiliated or weak in front of other people. It's a great, subtle reminder that, while these two have plenty of personality flaws, there are some very positive aspects to them and their friendship as well. Sirius might not take much seriously, but he would totally lay down in front of a charging herd of hippogryffs for James.
ANYWAY! YES! Nice little short'n'porny with an impressive amount of subtle characterization packed in. :D
Hahaha, advantisexual! That's a very Sirius term indeed. XD And this: Professor Sinistra, the teacher in question, has never quite forgiven him. Sirius doesn’t care. is utterly teenage Sirius as well.
There are just SO MANY great little details in here... James' writing going wonky and then him doing a piss-poor job of pretending to write lines once Sirius' hand is on his cock. Sirius' wicked amusement at James' discomposure. How well they know each other and the way that Sirius can read the slightest change in James' expression. James pushing up his glasses as a habitual/frustrated motion. The written banter and the underlying meaning. James' determination to get revenge -- and Sirius' anticipation of it.
And I really, really like the little bit that tells us that Sirius does have limits -- and more for James' sake than his own. He doesn't want to get James into real trouble or, more significantly, to see him humiliated or weak in front of other people. It's a great, subtle reminder that, while these two have plenty of personality flaws, there are some very positive aspects to them and their friendship as well. Sirius might not take much seriously, but he would totally lay down in front of a charging herd of hippogryffs for James.
ANYWAY! YES! Nice little short'n'porny with an impressive amount of subtle characterization packed in. :D