That was fantastic. Completely amazing. I loved how you introduced Neville's.
The beginning from this nice lady's POV was fantastic! I really enjoyed that peek into this stranger's day and seeing Neville first through her eyes. :)
And then, wow, Draco's POV, that introduction was completely erotic and sexy. I loved how you described the way Draco felt, and again once Neville arrived, oh my god, Neville naked, indeed, a sight to behold! It was fantastic and I'm in love with hung!Neville (and know Trys has a huge spot for it as well, in fact, I think I got mine from her! NICE!) and just everything about their dynamic was brilliant.
I loved, too, the contrast, the sweet and gentle beginning and this smoking hot and intense moment between Draco and Neville.
The beginning from this nice lady's POV was fantastic! I really enjoyed that peek into this stranger's day and seeing Neville first through her eyes. :)
And then, wow, Draco's POV, that introduction was completely erotic and sexy. I loved how you described the way Draco felt, and again once Neville arrived, oh my god, Neville naked, indeed, a sight to behold! It was fantastic and I'm in love with hung!Neville (and know Trys has a huge spot for it as well, in fact, I think I got mine from her! NICE!) and just everything about their dynamic was brilliant.
I loved, too, the contrast, the sweet and gentle beginning and this smoking hot and intense moment between Draco and Neville.
Excellent job!