Bwaha! The "impending doom" that's the start of a work week indeed!
and chances were (with how meek he seemed to be) that she was going to rip him a new one for having not gotten what she’d asked for. -- Ahahaha, right! Nice...
I'm impressed with how three-dimensional you've made what ought to be a throw-away character. I can actually imagine her going on about her day, having a life of her own, even as our focus moves to our main characters. Nice little detail.
You've made Neville so very Neville here even while making him a believable "D" in a "D/s" scenario. That can't be an easy thing to do, so big kudos to you. Also, I'm loving the way you've snuck in that sort of offhanded bit about Draco having a thing for plants. We see plenty of fic in which plants are part of sex play, but generally just because bondage and teasing and so forth are fun. The fact that Draco specifically likes plants on top of the usual is a fab addition. Double kudos!
and chances were (with how meek he seemed to be) that she was going to rip him a new one for having not gotten what she’d asked for. -- Ahahaha, right! Nice...
I'm impressed with how three-dimensional you've made what ought to be a throw-away character. I can actually imagine her going on about her day, having a life of her own, even as our focus moves to our main characters. Nice little detail.
You've made Neville so very Neville here even while making him a believable "D" in a "D/s" scenario. That can't be an easy thing to do, so big kudos to you. Also, I'm loving the way you've snuck in that sort of offhanded bit about Draco having a thing for plants. We see plenty of fic in which plants are part of sex play, but generally just because bondage and teasing and so forth are fun. The fact that Draco specifically likes plants on top of the usual is a fab addition. Double kudos!