Daily Deviant
- there is no such thing as 'too kinky'
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7th December 2016 20:08
OK, this was JUST the thing I was looking for with that prompt! Charlie is so appealing -- muscly and hot, oh hell yes, but also so charming and laid back, and... just, like, interested in his nieces and nephews as people! Yes!

Truth be told, he liked the boy. He was funny and bright, with a very Weasley sense of humour. James loved Quidditch, found dragons fascinating, and the conversation between him and Charlie always flowed easily.

I love that part. It adds so much more to the characterization, for both of them. But that's not to diminish how hot the sexy parts were, because then there is this:

watching his partner's face as they took somebody inside their body for the first time...it was an indescribable rush. He loved seeing that moment of euphoric surprise when the pain melted into pleasure.

;alskjdf;lskjdf. I know I said in the prompt virgin or not was all good, but I did not fully realize how INTO VIRGIN KINK I WOULD BE. Aaaaaaaaahhhhh, 12 years in this goddamn fandom and I have a new kink now! BECAUSE OF THIS. Charlie Weasley, oh dear lord. But also -- he's not all gross and skeevy with it! That is a key thing for me! Old disgusting Charlie would not be hot, but you made him so, so hot, and that can be so hard to do with a pairing like this, so, you are amazing, MA. :)

Also, this:

"All right, lad, why don't you do a spin for me. Slowly."

*fistbite* Also:

"I'm gonna make you love it."

*whimper*

And then, the very best part of all the best parts, dear author, was when you had Harry have to stay over too, and as the dirty talk got more intense from Charlie, I thought to myself, oh my god, is THE KEY LINE I prompted and found so shamelessly pervy actually going to make an appearance? Could I possibly be this lucky?

"Shhh, baby. Your daddy can't know you're here."

And then my brain exploded and it was all over. :D :D :D Thank you so much!! This was GLORIOUS. ♥
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