Dear Tryslora, I absolutely loved this. It just flowed, and seemed so believable to me. The crowded restaurant, the two guys meeting, the 7 course meal and the sorbet between dishes, and (ahem) what followed next. I loved all the descriptions of the foods, the waiter, and the beneath the table physicalness. I would pay you to have this be a running h/d fiction. Kudos to you, a most excellent, wonderful read. <3<3<3
It just flowed, and seemed so believable to me. The crowded restaurant, the two guys meeting, the 7 course meal and the sorbet between dishes, and (ahem) what followed next. I loved all the descriptions of the foods, the waiter, and the beneath the table physicalness.
I would pay you to have this be a running h/d fiction.
Kudos to you, a most excellent, wonderful read. <3<3<3