This is just beautiful. I love, I absolutely love your characterisation of Lily. She's truly lovely, and I love how she feels about Cho. I love that at times she feels a little bit insecure, but at the same time it's like, she knows who she is, you know? It's truly wonderful. I love Cho! :D She's such a great mentor, and really brings the best in Lily. I love the tension and they obviously had these feelings. . . okay, totally hot for each other. LOL Amazing!