Oh.My.God. This is AMAZING! I LOVE what you did with my prompt, and it's so much MORE than I ever expected! When I saw it up, I went and got a glass of wine and settled in to read. Then snorted said wine out my nose at this: He’d spilled his spunk in Sydney, jerked his johnson in Jakarta and wanked his willie in Winnipeg,
And then, you stabbed me in the heart: So, he ran, further and further away, every summer, every holiday, any time he had a free, long weekend. He wrapped himself up in his long cloaks and his isolation and he ran.
The heart-rending pain of his anger and isolation... The rage replaced everything else he might have ever imagined he felt for Remus Lupin. It was what he was struggling so hard to hold onto as he closed his eyes tight and stroked himself to completion with haggard breath and angry grunts.
This.... This is so much more than I could have imagined. And the ending, oh, thank you so much for that! Thank you for Remus being so persistent, so determined, so... hot.
“Please, Remus.”
“Say it again,” Remus panted through the exertion and strain.
“Please.”
“No. The other part.”
Severus looked at him, confused, then smiled and whispered, “Remus.”
He’d spilled his spunk in Sydney, jerked his johnson in Jakarta and wanked his willie in Winnipeg,
And then, you stabbed me in the heart:
So, he ran, further and further away, every summer, every holiday, any time he had a free, long weekend. He wrapped himself up in his long cloaks and his isolation and he ran.
The heart-rending pain of his anger and isolation...
The rage replaced everything else he might have ever imagined he felt for Remus Lupin. It was what he was struggling so hard to hold onto as he closed his eyes tight and stroked himself to completion with haggard breath and angry grunts.
This.... This is so much more than I could have imagined. And the ending, oh, thank you so much for that! Thank you for Remus being so persistent, so determined, so... hot.
“Please, Remus.”
“Say it again,” Remus panted through the exertion and strain.
“Please.”
“No. The other part.”
Severus looked at him, confused, then smiled and whispered, “Remus.”
So lovely.
Thank you thank you thank you!