What a wonderful comment; thank you so much! I love hearing which sections/lines you think worked.
Am I right that Minerva gives pleasure to Hermione and draws her own pleasure from that, presumably, as it may befit their previous relation of teacher and pupil? Yes, exactly; this is how I saw things. Tbh, I don't actually think Minerva would have a relationship with a student, no matter how long it had been since that student left school, but if she did, I suspect she would be more comfortable with the relationship if she kept herself a bit distant. So I don't see her as accepting actual orgasm from Hermione.
Thanks for reading and for leaving such a thoughtful response.
Am I right that Minerva gives pleasure to Hermione and draws her own pleasure from that, presumably, as it may befit their previous relation of teacher and pupil?
Yes, exactly; this is how I saw things. Tbh, I don't actually think Minerva would have a relationship with a student, no matter how long it had been since that student left school, but if she did, I suspect she would be more comfortable with the relationship if she kept herself a bit distant. So I don't see her as accepting actual orgasm from Hermione.
Thanks for reading and for leaving such a thoughtful response.