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21st April 2016 12:45
Okay, back to make all the other comments that reading it again has made me think.

Teddy is glorious, turning James on just by the way he talks. And being so in control and masterful, which doesn't just make James melt...

James being so totally in denial, or doing his best to be.
It wasn't because of...it had nothing to do with what he'd been saying.
and
images of him pinned down beneath the pale, lithe frame of his brother rocketed through his skull. No. That wasn't...He didn't…
and
This was insanity. This was…


I also like the way there is the Potter impatience which shows in both James and Albus, but which Teddy doesn't have.

And James's willingness just to let them do what they want with him. Which also contrasts with Albus - Albus flashed Teddy an amused look—Al had never been one for taking orders , so you have the similarities and differences between the Potters all shown together.

Oh gods, and then you have Teddy. Did I mention Teddy? "It's always my turn," asfd;lkjsfd....
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