What a lovely, perfectly written fiction. I loved the way you wrote your descriptions, 'like he was coming apart and falling together, all at the same time.' I felt as if I was a silent spectator in the room watching them. Sweet first time story, Kudos! :)
I loved the way you wrote your descriptions,
'like he was coming apart and falling together, all at the same time.'
I felt as if I was a silent spectator in the room watching them.
Sweet first time story, Kudos! :)