Oh this is gorgeously sexy! I love first times (let's be real, I love all the times, but first times especially) and you did such a great job of capturing exactly why I love them. The trust and desire, the embarrassment and arousal, the awkwardness and the pleasure. Oh it was just all so good! I loved how clearly their characterizations and their obvious feelings for one another came through, and the whole thing was super steamy! :D