There are so many things I love about this fic. The song lyrics you made up for one. "My trousers, my trousers, oh, my trousers!" "I've been cleaning my wand at night. I've been hoping that you just might", just the name Drowned my Mermaids! LOL! Oh gosh, I get a kick out of those things every time I read this. But more importantly is how adorably clueless and then completely ridiculous Harry is, how confident, brazen, completely smitten Teddy is, though I love how in moments you give us a peek behind his bravado so we can see just how nervous he is too, and how utterly infatuated he is. Harry dancing by himself, being so completely dorky and smitten and then feeling so stupid about it, awwwww. I mean, jfc, could there be a more precious thing?
But I think my favorite parts are the last two scenes--the sex scene in of itself just flows so well, and I can hear the music in the rhythm of your words and it's just so sexy and hot and GUH. I just can't take it, lsjdfkjsdlfdsj. OMG the kissing. The kissing is gonna be the death of me!!! And then the last scene, where Harry is blissfully happy, panics, and then blissfully happy once he knows there's nothing to panic over. So much love. Teddy catching him naked through the Floo had me LOLOL, omg. <3333 My heart is full when I read this story. It's silly in parts, and hilarious in other parts, but so totally sigh-worthy romantic. Ugh, I love it so much!!! Thank you for writing this, and the dedication was such a completely surprise, I can't even tell you!!! It's wonderful. ♥ ♥ ♥
But I think my favorite parts are the last two scenes--the sex scene in of itself just flows so well, and I can hear the music in the rhythm of your words and it's just so sexy and hot and GUH. I just can't take it, lsjdfkjsdlfdsj. OMG the kissing. The kissing is gonna be the death of me!!! And then the last scene, where Harry is blissfully happy, panics, and then blissfully happy once he knows there's nothing to panic over. So much love. Teddy catching him naked through the Floo had me LOLOL, omg. <3333 My heart is full when I read this story. It's silly in parts, and hilarious in other parts, but so totally sigh-worthy romantic. Ugh, I love it so much!!! Thank you for writing this, and the dedication was such a completely surprise, I can't even tell you!!! It's wonderful. ♥ ♥ ♥