Okay, I will quote one or two more things back at you after all...
Snape hadn’t jinxed him, either. He hadn’t incapacitated him in any way. Lupin had his own wand in his hand, gripped so tight his nails dug into his palm, but he never raised it, never pointed it at Snape. The two had merely stared at each other, the only sounds the coarse rasp of their excited breathing and the drip drip drip of a broken tap. -- This bit. This is just so damn evocative. Somehow this is the point at which the intensity just ratchets up to eleven.
Surprisingly, these were not the hate-filled stares of loathing Snape aimed at James and Sirius, but more appraising looks. Lupin wondered if Snape had managed to put slow poison in his food and was observing him for the effects. -- LOL Awesome. XD
The "different house" and "common room" metaphor and those final lines... Abkhahipfl, such good stuff! So much said in what's not quite said. The things they're both acknowledging in their roundabout way... *flailllll*
"Awkward, fumbling, first time boysex" bullet-proof kink button: SLAMMED. *faints*
"Don't you dare come yet" bullet-proof kink button: SLAMMITY SLAM SLAMMED. *falls down and dies*
SO much great stuff here, and I'm SO sorry I didn't comment when I should have. I hope you'll manage to see this and that you're doing well out there. ♥
Snape hadn’t jinxed him, either. He hadn’t incapacitated him in any way. Lupin had his own wand in his hand, gripped so tight his nails dug into his palm, but he never raised it, never pointed it at Snape. The two had merely stared at each other, the only sounds the coarse rasp of their excited breathing and the drip drip drip of a broken tap. -- This bit. This is just so damn evocative. Somehow this is the point at which the intensity just ratchets up to eleven.
Surprisingly, these were not the hate-filled stares of loathing Snape aimed at James and Sirius, but more appraising looks. Lupin wondered if Snape had managed to put slow poison in his food and was observing him for the effects. -- LOL Awesome. XD
The "different house" and "common room" metaphor and those final lines... Abkhahipfl, such good stuff! So much said in what's not quite said. The things they're both acknowledging in their roundabout way... *flailllll*
"Awkward, fumbling, first time boysex" bullet-proof kink button: SLAMMED. *faints*
"Top partner/both partners losing his/their shit" bullet-proof kink button: SLAMMED *faints moar*
"Don't you dare come yet" bullet-proof kink button: SLAMMITY SLAM SLAMMED. *falls down and dies*
SO much great stuff here, and I'm SO sorry I didn't comment when I should have. I hope you'll manage to see this and that you're doing well out there. ♥