Oh, this is wonderful. Such an amazingly written piece, I can hear Severus's thoughts throughout - the viewpoint is so convincing, and the state of Malfoy is beautiful and terrible and inappropriately hot.
And the barriers coming down and the humiliation for Draco of that on top of everything else, and Severus suddenly having to face the real Malfoy and not the version he's been visualising.
And the barriers coming down and the humiliation for Draco of that on top of everything else, and Severus suddenly having to face the real Malfoy and not the version he's been visualising.
So good.