Ahhhhhh, Mystery Author, thank you! This fic hit the spot exactly, and you managed to include several things that I didn't ask for - clothing descriptions, family affection, love matches. I was grinning through this entire work. I can't begin to name all my favorite parts, because I enjoyed all of this, but a couple of lines that I especially liked:
“Merlin,” Draco breathes, his voice shaky. “Astoria. Love. You have to move. Please.”
She opens her eyes then, staring at Draco. He’s flushed, a sheen of sweat on his forehead, his expression tense. She shifts, startling a moan from him.
Seriously, seriously hot to me.
This fic had humor, sexiness, love - so much that I adore. Thank you, author! This was a lovely, lovely gift.
“Merlin,” Draco breathes, his voice shaky. “Astoria. Love. You have to move. Please.”
She opens her eyes then, staring at Draco. He’s flushed, a sheen of sweat on his forehead, his expression tense. She shifts, startling a moan from him.
Seriously, seriously hot to me.
This fic had humor, sexiness, love - so much that I adore. Thank you, author! This was a lovely, lovely gift.