Wow! Here I was expecting a fun, sexy romp, and I got it, but then you also brought in the emotions. I love how understanding and sweet you made Lavender, and how introspective you made Ron. And then the gut punch at the end just...damn. Brilliant job, MA. Nice writing, although I'm left feeling bad for everyone here.
I love how understanding and sweet you made Lavender, and how introspective you made Ron.
And then the gut punch at the end just...damn.
Brilliant job, MA. Nice writing, although I'm left feeling bad for everyone here.