Where are all the comments? I need to go flail all over you and rec this everywhere.
I love this. I mean I absolutely adore this. Long plotty wonderful emotional story, and this just... it builds so well. And HOLY CRAP the second person. I've never seen it used so well in such a long piece, and honestly, I barely noticed it. I mean it WORKED. It worked so well, and it just sucked me in and held on and wouldn't let me go. It reads so quickly, it's beautiful.
I want to go back and pick out all the details, but I sadly have a brain like a sieve. I just want to say that it took me on a wonderful emotional rollercoaster ride, and I am so so SO glad I got to read this. Thank you for sharing this!
I love this. I mean I absolutely adore this. Long plotty wonderful emotional story, and this just... it builds so well. And HOLY CRAP the second person. I've never seen it used so well in such a long piece, and honestly, I barely noticed it. I mean it WORKED. It worked so well, and it just sucked me in and held on and wouldn't let me go. It reads so quickly, it's beautiful.
I want to go back and pick out all the details, but I sadly have a brain like a sieve. I just want to say that it took me on a wonderful emotional rollercoaster ride, and I am so so SO glad I got to read this. Thank you for sharing this!