Omg, that was perfect! I swear you must have some psychic link to my id, MA, because you had so many of my favorite things in there that I didn't even request. The tone was perfect, I'm such a sucker for messiness and insecurity and pining. The sex (both scenes! A twofer!) was delicious and I found draco's premature ejaculation inordinantly hot. Like, I think I may have found a new kink I didn't even realize I had. For all that Draco is the experienced one and Harry's the virgin, Draco being the one who loses control is so good. And I also loved that there was a story here with real heart, and that Harry and Draco were able to work through the differences that broke them up the first time and leave them on a positive and sexy note.
Thank you so much, MA. This was fabulous!