I love everything about this fic! All the little details about Umbridge’s thinking that are just…they seem s normal but they SO aren’t (she would never forget the first time she had been allowed to perform the Imperius and the Petrifying Charm on the one she had caught in the Forest on her thirteenth Christmas, it had been such a disappointment to have to free it on Twelfth Night. LAWL)
What makes this neat is that while there’s penetration, it is almost in the denouement. It’s nice, to be sure, but the caning is brilliant. And the “filling her with Pureblood seed” is so perversely Dolores. And really, if there was anything that Dolores would love, it would be a cat-o-nine tails!
Seriously, I don’t think anyone in HP is as well suited in a bizarre way as Argus and Dolores. I am glad you made him the “top” (though you know she does it from the bottom).
My.
God.
You did it.
I love everything about this fic! All the little details about Umbridge’s thinking that are just…they seem s normal but they SO aren’t (she would never forget the first time she had been allowed to perform the Imperius and the Petrifying Charm on the one she had caught in the Forest on her thirteenth Christmas, it had been such a disappointment to have to free it on Twelfth Night. LAWL)
What makes this neat is that while there’s penetration, it is almost in the denouement. It’s nice, to be sure, but the caning is brilliant. And the “filling her with Pureblood seed” is so perversely Dolores. And really, if there was anything that Dolores would love, it would be a cat-o-nine tails!
Seriously, I don’t think anyone in HP is as well suited in a bizarre way as Argus and Dolores. I am glad you made him the “top” (though you know she does it from the bottom).
Thank you, mystery author!