Giiiiiiiiirl. This is one of the most erotic things I've ever, ever read. The buildup of tension in this fic is downright maddening, the baby steps from one depravity to another, OMFG, I can't even. Charlie is perfect. PERFECT. Shamelessly lusty and unburdened by scruples, and, and... the way he was so methodical about it, but we get to see how strongly it's affecting him, how very badly he wants to have his way with her. *bites through fist* And the strong implication that he's toyed with Lucy before, I mean let me count the ways you nearly made me squirm right out of my chair. The level of erotic detail here is exquisite. And basically... if this naughtiness is the result of my influence, I proudly take the blame. :D :D
Giiiiiiiiirl. This is one of the most erotic things I've ever, ever read. The buildup of tension in this fic is downright maddening, the baby steps from one depravity to another, OMFG, I can't even. Charlie is perfect. PERFECT. Shamelessly lusty and unburdened by scruples, and, and... the way he was so methodical about it, but we get to see how strongly it's affecting him, how very badly he wants to have his way with her. *bites through fist* And the strong implication that he's toyed with Lucy before, I mean let me count the ways you nearly made me squirm right out of my chair. The level of erotic detail here is exquisite. And basically... if this naughtiness is the result of my influence, I proudly take the blame. :D :D
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