(Ahaha, yes it works very well as a summary, too.)
You know how much I love this already, but what really gets me every time I read it is the almost antagonistic brotherly banter that is so clearly laden with affection--like you ride that line so well that's it's not too hard or soft, but just just right.
and GUH. The sex was great. Like I can't even talk about it. That they can't wait two more hours--that they're both gagging for it so much that they risk discovery even though they have their own flat?? I mean, it just ups the hotness like I can't even say. slfjlskfjlskjflskfjlkfjdlksfjdskfjl pretty much. *ded*
But also, I have to mention, you do such an excellent job establishing the dinner and the side characters--this big weird extended family, and you don't spent much time with them (because duh, we want to get to the sexy bits *g*) but manage to paint such a clear picture in very few words. Impressed.
Also. He'd tried out because Scorpius wouldn't have otherwise, and they were, in many things, attached at the hip. just makes me think there needs to be Al/James/Scorpius. :DDDDD
You know how much I love this already, but what really gets me every time I read it is the almost antagonistic brotherly banter that is so clearly laden with affection--like you ride that line so well that's it's not too hard or soft, but just just right.
and GUH. The sex was great. Like I can't even talk about it. That they can't wait two more hours--that they're both gagging for it so much that they risk discovery even though they have their own flat?? I mean, it just ups the hotness like I can't even say. slfjlskfjlskjflskfjlkfjdlksfjdskfjl pretty much. *ded*
But also, I have to mention, you do such an excellent job establishing the dinner and the side characters--this big weird extended family, and you don't spent much time with them (because duh, we want to get to the sexy bits *g*) but manage to paint such a clear picture in very few words. Impressed.
Also. He'd tried out because Scorpius wouldn't have otherwise, and they were, in many things, attached at the hip. just makes me think there needs to be Al/James/Scorpius. :DDDDD