Give me a minute here. My thoughts are all over the place and let's not even talk about my knickers. I'm just trying to cope with the blazing hotness that is Bill Weasley. Not that I expect to ever really be able to do that, the way you've written him here. AHHHHHH OMFG.
You had me panting from the very beginning, MA. That opening scene was deliciously erotic, maybe in part because it felt so real. Who hasn't waited and waited to have the opportunity to sneak and do something naughty like that? You captured that anticipation and nervous excitement beautifully.
She'd never liked any of the girls Bill had brought home over the years; none of them had been good enough for him. She tried to justify her feelings as concern for her brother, wanting the best for him. But Ginny had always been possessive of Bill, never really wanting to share him with any other woman.
Nnnnnnngh, that is so spot-on from what we see in the books, and one reason why I love this pairing so much, and I love that Ginny doesn't quite realize (or admit to herself) the true nature of those feelings.
However, since Bill had moved home to work at Gringotts, and definitely since his breakup, his tastes in pornography seemed to have got more and more extreme.
Oh, the fist-biting you inspired in me with the faintest suggestion. I think 'smoldering' is the appropriate word for Bill in this fic. From the moment he shows up in the kitchen, he absolutely oozes control, and it really is a bloody crime that he's fictional. *cries*
I can't believe all the kinks of mine you fit into this fic. fjfdksfjsdfsd The D/s and the spanking and the face-fucking, I was pretty much a mess by the end. But what I loved more than anything else were the hints of roleplay. This isn't just a matter of Bill saying, "Over my knee, now." The way they dance around each other, feeling each other out, is what made this fic for me. And the way Ginny cranks up the volume on her 'part' because she knows it's what Bill needs. That moment when she feels his erection and almost giggles about it — PERFECTION.
Bill was not like anyone else she'd been with in the past; they had been boys, but he was a man. An experienced man who knew precisely what he was doing. She wondered how many other women he'd been with, how many others he'd done things like this with.
Eeeeeee, and the dirtywrongness of the age disparity on top of it all!! I want to roll around in it.
"You'd like it if I fucked you like this, wouldn't you?" he whispered. "Nice and hard. Maybe I will next time — and the time after that – and when Charlie comes home, I can fuck you while you suck him off — you can be our little fuck toy—"
That, of course, was the proverbial nail in the coffin. :DDD
And the ending!!! Absolutely perfect, as Bill 'snaps to' and they both seek to rationalize what they've just done, and both of them know there's no stopping now.
*siiiiiiiiigh* Thank you so much, MA!!! I can't think of a better way to start a new year than with kinky goodness like this, and you've given me a fic I know I'll enjoy re-reading for years to come. ♥ ♥ ♥
*drools all over the place*
Give me a minute here. My thoughts are all over the place
and let's not even talk about my knickers. I'm just trying to cope with the blazing hotness that is Bill Weasley. Not that I expect to ever really be able to do that, the way you've written him here. AHHHHHH OMFG.You had me panting from the very beginning, MA. That opening scene was deliciously erotic, maybe in part because it felt so real. Who hasn't waited and waited to have the opportunity to sneak and do something naughty like that? You captured that anticipation and nervous excitement beautifully.
She'd never liked any of the girls Bill had brought home over the years; none of them had been good enough for him. She tried to justify her feelings as concern for her brother, wanting the best for him. But Ginny had always been possessive of Bill, never really wanting to share him with any other woman.
Nnnnnnngh, that is so spot-on from what we see in the books, and one reason why I love this pairing so much, and I love that Ginny doesn't quite realize (or admit to herself) the true nature of those feelings.
However, since Bill had moved home to work at Gringotts, and definitely since his breakup, his tastes in pornography seemed to have got more and more extreme.
Oh, the fist-biting you inspired in me with the faintest suggestion. I think 'smoldering' is the appropriate word for Bill in this fic. From the moment he shows up in the kitchen, he absolutely oozes control, and it really is a bloody crime that he's fictional. *cries*
I can't believe all the kinks of mine you fit into this fic. fjfdksfjsdfsd The D/s and the spanking and the face-fucking, I was pretty much a mess by the end. But what I loved more than anything else were the hints of roleplay. This isn't just a matter of Bill saying, "Over my knee, now." The way they dance around each other, feeling each other out, is what made this fic for me. And the way Ginny cranks up the volume on her 'part' because she knows it's what Bill needs. That moment when she feels his erection and almost giggles about it — PERFECTION.
Bill was not like anyone else she'd been with in the past; they had been boys, but he was a man. An experienced man who knew precisely what he was doing. She wondered how many other women he'd been with, how many others he'd done things like this with.
Eeeeeee, and the dirtywrongness of the age disparity on top of it all!! I want to roll around in it.
"You'd like it if I fucked you like this, wouldn't you?" he whispered. "Nice and hard. Maybe I will next time — and the time after that – and when Charlie comes home, I can fuck you while you suck him off — you can be our little fuck toy—"
That, of course, was the proverbial nail in the coffin. :DDD
And the ending!!! Absolutely perfect, as Bill 'snaps to' and they both seek to rationalize what they've just done, and both of them know there's no stopping now.
*siiiiiiiiigh* Thank you so much, MA!!! I can't think of a better way to start a new year than with kinky goodness like this, and you've given me a fic I know I'll enjoy re-reading for years to come. ♥ ♥ ♥