What makes this fic so hot for me (and I mean hot like BLAZING) is Lily Luna's voice. She really comes across as a confused little girl here, so much that I almost feel guilty for being so turned on by it. The bit with her fantasies, for example... nnnnngh, just perfection. It's saying something that her desire for her father feels pure, while her relationship with her brother feels dirty and wrong and cheap. A real mindfuck of a fic. I love it. >:D
Actually, I'm not doing much better this time around, so let me just get this out of the way.
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What makes this fic so hot for me (and I mean hot like BLAZING) is Lily Luna's voice. She really comes across as a confused little girl here, so much that I almost feel guilty for being so turned on by it. The bit with her fantasies, for example... nnnnngh, just perfection. It's saying something that her desire for her father feels pure, while her relationship with her brother feels dirty and wrong and cheap. A real mindfuck of a fic. I love it. >:D