OMG! This is not going to be a very coherent comment, so apologies right off the bat, because THIS FIC !!!!!
Firstly…. the watch. The Frickin' Watch ! I love a sentient magical object as the storyteller….. love love love, and this is done to such perfection, imo.
Going through the generations, right back to the first Sirius Black, helloooo OMG! I really like the way time tells a significant part of the story too, of course, it's a watch, but still, we're able to float through the different eras while still being tethered.
James and Sirius…. oh god, all the wants and the feels and the unffff. the angle and his urgency make it rough, it's almost more than Sirius can bear, and so good it makes Sirius' knees buckle. THIS - so much!!! That's the glory of the slightly-rough smexin', hair pulling and all…. it's just So. Good. !
Draco and Severus were almost my undoing - helloooo, size!kink and then some. The images were fantastic, the entire give and take of it, the slow ratchet up of tension, sexual, then physical, and Draco taking more and more…. and they both satisfying each other… just. Yeah.
and Harry and Teddy…. again, done to perfection. The age difference, the 8 years of UST and Teddy actually leaving, then coming back and laying himself bare for Harry…. and the.. yeah, the everything.
This is better than I ever thought it could be, and I'm amazed and rather humbled that my simple prompt encouraged this gloriousness !!! Thank you, thank you, thank you!
No?
BECAUSE MY MIND'S BLOWN, THAT'S WHY!!!!!!!
OMG! This is not going to be a very coherent comment, so apologies right off the bat, because THIS FIC !!!!!
Firstly…. the watch. The Frickin' Watch ! I love a sentient magical object as the storyteller….. love love love, and this is done to such perfection, imo.
Going through the generations, right back to the first Sirius Black, helloooo OMG! I really like the way time tells a significant part of the story too, of course, it's a watch, but still, we're able to float through the different eras while still being tethered.
James and Sirius…. oh god, all the wants and the feels and the unffff.
the angle and his urgency make it rough, it's almost more than Sirius can bear, and so good it makes Sirius' knees buckle.
THIS - so much!!! That's the glory of the slightly-rough smexin', hair pulling and all…. it's just So. Good. !
Draco and Severus were almost my undoing - helloooo, size!kink and then some. The images were fantastic, the entire give and take of it, the slow ratchet up of tension, sexual, then physical, and Draco taking more and more…. and they both satisfying each other… just. Yeah.
and Harry and Teddy…. again, done to perfection. The age difference, the 8 years of UST and Teddy actually leaving, then coming back and laying himself bare for Harry…. and the.. yeah, the everything.
This is better than I ever thought it could be, and I'm amazed and rather humbled that my simple prompt encouraged this gloriousness !!!
Thank you, thank you, thank you!