Oh wow, I am almost a bit teary-eyed at how beautiful that was! *dabs eyes* Damn hormones. :) But really! It was written with such a soft, lovely tone to it -- I fell in love with each of them right along with them. Neville in particular is just perfect -- the steadfast friend, a bit bumbling, not as confident as he could be, but also so sweet and patient and sexy. And I adore your attention to the oral sex before the main event. :D For some reason, the thought of Neville going down on Lavender before he does anything else fills me with glee about his giving nature and mad sex skills. La!
Also, this: “Of course,” he says. “I’ve stayed before. I can go home and get some pyjamas and be back—” OH, NEVILLE.
Also, this: “Of course,” he says. “I’ve stayed before. I can go home and get some pyjamas and be back—” OH, NEVILLE.
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