I love this story and the way you've told it. It's a shame that a lot of people will likely steer away from it due to the dark themes and non-con warning, because they'll be missing a real gem.
Ron is, of course, creepily unhinged, but as the story progresses, we see more and more exactly how unhinged. His ability to justify the most cruel behavior and to believe his own lies is frightening.
This piece is brilliant for where it ends. The worst is yet to come, and we're left to imagine all the possible terrible outcomes. We can only guess at how far Ron will go in the end and what the final damage will be for all parties involved.
And oddly, I think I feel even more sorry for Draco than I do for Harry. I have a suspicion that he could actually come out of this whole thing more damaged than Harry. The layers of guilt he'd heap on himself would be a hell of a heavy load.
Ron is, of course, creepily unhinged, but as the story progresses, we see more and more exactly how unhinged. His ability to justify the most cruel behavior and to believe his own lies is frightening.
This piece is brilliant for where it ends. The worst is yet to come, and we're left to imagine all the possible terrible outcomes. We can only guess at how far Ron will go in the end and what the final damage will be for all parties involved.
And oddly, I think I feel even more sorry for Draco than I do for Harry. I have a suspicion that he could actually come out of this whole thing more damaged than Harry. The layers of guilt he'd heap on himself would be a hell of a heavy load.
Anyway, fantastically eerie story, brilliantly told. ::applauds::