Absolutely gorgeous! I love the way James found out enough to make the move towards Albus -- such a Slytherin way of doing things, as opposed to Albus' Gryffindor bravery at the end. I love the way you drew James' jealousy and his attempts to supress his attraction.
The tube description was so well written that it was like being there. I could hear the noises, smell the smells and feel the draughts. When I was about the age these two are in this fic, I used to travel between Queens Park for work and Willesden Junction near where I lived, so this particular journey felt very nostalgic and familiar.
The tube description was so well written that it was like being there. I could hear the noises, smell the smells and feel the draughts. When I was about the age these two are in this fic, I used to travel between Queens Park for work and Willesden Junction near where I lived, so this particular journey felt very nostalgic and familiar.