Wow, this is lovely. I feel like a spoiled princess! Thank you so much for writing this for me!
The writing is gorgeous, like a commenter above said, it just flows so well. I love the pacing of this, the slow build, the misdirect with your OC. So many scenes came alive for me because they were written so vividly with all the little details. That first scene in the tube, when the lights are off and they're going through the tunnel, with Al leaning up against James, that was definitely one of my favorites. And the last was just such a perfect mix of dirtyhot and sweetness. I really felt for them both. I'm wondering if, after a few weeks of this in the freedom of the muggle world, if they'll ever return. ;)
The writing is gorgeous, like a commenter above said, it just flows so well. I love the pacing of this, the slow build, the misdirect with your OC. So many scenes came alive for me because they were written so vividly with all the little details. That first scene in the tube, when the lights are off and they're going through the tunnel, with Al leaning up against James, that was definitely one of my favorites. And the last was just such a perfect mix of dirtyhot and sweetness. I really felt for them both. I'm wondering if, after a few weeks of this in the freedom of the muggle world, if they'll ever return. ;)
Thank you again! It was so lovely. :D