Oh my god. This is gorgeously written, and so very raw and honest and shameful in the best of ways--I really think half the fun of reading porn is the dirtiness of it, and that a character feeling dirty and wrong and wanting anyway is the best sort of tension-building. And then for Al to want the same thing and also feel so ashamed that he could cry...
The ending, too. It's so sweet.
That said, I'm going to reread a bit of it, and then I'll be in my bunk. For some catharsis. *cough*
The ending, too. It's so sweet.
That said, I'm going to reread a bit of it, and then I'll be in my bunk. For some catharsis. *cough*