Hehehe, I just couldn't resist posting some good old-fashioned H/D shower smut on the first day! And this is some good old-fashioned H/D shower smut... except when it isn't.
The way you've subverted some of the usual cliches here is fantastic. Harry's not clueless at all; rather it's Draco who's a bit slow to understand. (I love how clearly we can see Harry's motivations through Draco's POV even when Draco's not capable of seeing them himself.) And although Harry's definitely a bold Gryffindor, he's not a rash one. He clearly gets that Draco is going to have to choose this for himself -- but he doesn't object to leading him by the nose (or some other, more appropriate part of his anatomy...) to that choice.
Ahhhh, the smut!! Still Harry is the one instigating the entire thing, but at the same time, he's letting Draco take the lead (or at least letting him think he's taking the lead), making Draco decide to do this. Somewhere along the way, Harry's figured out how to handle Draco's ego, eh? XD
And, nnngh! The quiet goading, the "come on, Malfoy." Duuuude. I think you just hit a kink button I didn't even know I had! ::faints::
The way you've subverted some of the usual cliches here is fantastic. Harry's not clueless at all; rather it's Draco who's a bit slow to understand. (I love how clearly we can see Harry's motivations through Draco's POV even when Draco's not capable of seeing them himself.) And although Harry's definitely a bold Gryffindor, he's not a rash one. He clearly gets that Draco is going to have to choose this for himself -- but he doesn't object to leading him by the nose (or some other, more appropriate part of his anatomy...) to that choice.
Ahhhh, the smut!! Still Harry is the one instigating the entire thing, but at the same time, he's letting Draco take the lead (or at least letting him think he's taking the lead), making Draco decide to do this. Somewhere along the way, Harry's figured out how to handle Draco's ego, eh? XD
And, nnngh! The quiet goading, the "come on, Malfoy." Duuuude. I think you just hit a kink button I didn't even know I had! ::faints::
Niiiiiiiiiice.